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[QUOTE="gbarules2999"]Foolz, what's the second song of your second post?Foolz3h
Habeas Corpses (Draconian Love) by El-P.
Did you like it? It actually reminded me of 43DH5. (I'll memorise the name eventually). :P
I'm always on a lookout for a song with a story behind it. ;)
[QUOTE="gbarules2999"]If the work gets any more complex, make sure you include some context.
Foolz3h
But what about those of us who might not enjoy WWII so much?
@Endless: You have to be careful recommending Advent Children to people; you forget how absolutely insane it is.
Good movie, though.
1) Find a good book with good action sequences and analyze.
2) Watch a good action movie, and then find a good action scene. Practice describing the scene on paper. Do this several times and look at how youchange your wording. Do this with writer friends to see how everyone compares.
3) My little brother has a lot of lego action figures lying around the house; I sometimes steal them and then coreograph the entire scene.
Try those out.
I liked it.
I also like that because the game (which I assume is Company of Heroes) is based on World War II, the game concept doesn't hold anyone back from enjoying your work. Though I'm a WWII fan ("fan" in loose terms, I find the entire event darkly fastinating), so I know all the coutries and their sides. If the work gets any more complex, make sure you include some context.
[QUOTE="millwrought"]In the case of Harry Potter, the 3rd book was the best by far.
iloveflash
Nope, the 4th killed all the other books. Sorry. Settle for second place?
The fourth was good, you be quiet. And the sixth book was abolutely fantastic.
Airheads: THERE OUDDA CONTROL!!!!!!!
(I swear, that's what I thought he was eating. I want an Airhead now. CRAVING.)
Hmm, to be honest I think I preferred the first draft. It was more focused, and I personally found it more powerful.
Foolz3h
It's still a work in progress, of course, so I'll be messing with it some more. Thanks for saying so, though; I know what to change next time.
@sandy: I'm glad, I thought so too.
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