SystemWars Monthly 2.0 - June 2010 (It's About Time Edition - 56k Warning)

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#101 NVIDIATI
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One issue with that spreadsheet, Just Cause 2 as much as I love it, I would not give an AAA score :P Otherwise nicely done.Skittles_McGee
Thanks, I'm sending out the spreadsheet so it can be changed around. Here is a link: http://www.mediafire.com/?md1jd2znm2m

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[QUOTE="Skittles_McGee"]One issue with that spreadsheet, Just Cause 2 as much as I love it, I would not give an AAA score :P Otherwise nicely done.NVIDIATI

Thanks, I'm sending out the spreadsheet so it can be changed around. Here is a link: http://www.mediafire.com/?md1jd2znm2m

Oh my, that's rather lovely. 8)
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#103 fabz_95
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Love the spreadsheet NVIDIATI!
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#104 Skittles_McGee
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Ah. Well, someone less tired and lazy than me, fix that. *cracks whip* Work!
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#105 NVIDIATI
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[QUOTE="Stevo_the_gamer"][QUOTE="NVIDIATI"]

One issue with that spreadsheet, Just Cause 2 as much as I love it, I would not give an AAA score :P Otherwise nicely done.Skittles_McGee
Thanks, I'm sending out the spreadsheet so it can be changed around. Here is a link: http://www.mediafire.com/?md1jd2znm2m

Oh my, that's rather lovely. 8)

I was about to PM it to you as I already have sent to to Fabz and Willy, but you got here 1st :P anyways I hope it helps when putting together the review section.
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#106 vguy555
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since the challenge is over, can someone please PM me the answers, i'm having a hard time finding those stars. Thanks!

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#107 NVIDIATI
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Love the spreadsheet NVIDIATI!fabz_95
Thanks, I was also thinking for the final version to have the platform that the game was reviewed on in bold.

Example:

If you reviewed PES 2008 on the PS3 the chart would look like this:

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#108 fabz_95
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[QUOTE="fabz_95"]Love the spreadsheet NVIDIATI!NVIDIATI

Thanks, I was also thinking for the final version to have the platform that the game was reviewed on in bold.

Example:

If you reviewed PES 2008 on the PS3 the chart would look like this:

That looks awesome.

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#109 NVIDIATI
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Ah. Well, someone less tired and lazy than me, fix that. *cracks whip* Work!Skittles_McGee

Fixed!

Also added some colour :P

SWM Review list Version 1.1:Download(If you don't have Excel 2007 click here)

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#110 Ibacai
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Hey, just because my review wasn't any good doesn't mean it can't be on the spread sheet, right? :(
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Hey, just because my review wasn't any good doesn't mean it can't be on the spread sheet, right? :(Ibacai
:lol: Sorry not all of the reviews are on the list, which review was it? and in which issue of SWM? I can add it if you like.
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#112 fabz_95
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[QUOTE="Skittles_McGee"]Ah. Well, someone less tired and lazy than me, fix that. *cracks whip* Work!NVIDIATI

Fixed!

Also added some colour :P

SWM Review list Version 1.1:Download(If you don't have Excel 2007 click here)

Awesome dude. If you can keep updating this, you'll be a very useful SWM member (that is if you get in of course, bwahwahwah).

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#113 NVIDIATI
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[QUOTE="NVIDIATI"]

[QUOTE="Skittles_McGee"]Ah. Well, someone less tired and lazy than me, fix that. *cracks whip* Work!fabz_95

Fixed!

*picture*

Also added some colour :P

SWM Review list Version 1.1:Download(If you don't have Excel 2007 click here)

Awesome dude. If you can keep updating this, you'll be a very useful SWM member (that is if you get in of course, bwahwahwah).

Forsure I'll have to fill in the gaps because I'm sure I've missed a couple of reviews. Also it would be great if everyone with a "???" could give it a real score for their review so I can add it.While I'm at it, what issue did you review Resident Evil 4?

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[QUOTE="Ibacai"]Hey, just because my review wasn't any good doesn't mean it can't be on the spread sheet, right? :(NVIDIATI
:lol: Sorry not all of the reviews are on the list, which review was it? and in which issue of SWM? I can add it if you like.

Pfft, no worries dude. It was my DA review in the March issue. It's really no big deal, just messing around with ya. :P
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#116 789shadow
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That was quite enjoyable to read. Can anyone contribute to this? I've got 11 weeks free and I'm running out of things to do. I'm not sure what I would talk about though...Indie_Hitman

Anyone can contribute. If you ever do figure out what to talk about, shoot it to us.

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#117 789shadow
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since the challenge is over, can someone please PM me the answers, i'm having a hard time finding those stars. Thanks!

vguy555

I'll send you my winning answers. :P

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[QUOTE="Indie_Hitman"]That was quite enjoyable to read. Can anyone contribute to this? I've got 11 weeks free and I'm running out of things to do. I'm not sure what I would talk about though...789shadow

Anyone can contribute. If you ever do figure out what to talk about, shoot it to us.

If I do think of something, should I PM...someone, what I would like to do first? Or just write it and send?
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[QUOTE="Indie_Hitman"] If I do think of something, should I PM...someone, what I would like to do first? Or just write it and send?

Yep, you can send me a PM with the writings -- if it's too long it can go through multiple PMs, or you can save it as a word document and send it to us via email (swmonthly@gmail.com). Just send me a PM to me if you do send it there since I never check it. :P
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[QUOTE="Indie_Hitman"] If I do think of something, should I PM...someone, what I would like to do first? Or just write it and send?Stevo_the_gamer
Yep, you can send me a PM with the writings -- if it's too long it can go through multiple PMs, or you can save it as a word document and send it to us via email (swmonthly@gmail.com). Just send me a PM to me if you do send it there since I never check it. :P

Would it not be best to notify you what I want to do though? In case it's unsuitable/ out of place?
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#121 NVIDIATI
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[QUOTE="Stevo_the_gamer"][QUOTE="Indie_Hitman"] If I do think of something, should I PM...someone, what I would like to do first? Or just write it and send?Indie_Hitman
Yep, you can send me a PM with the writings -- if it's too long it can go through multiple PMs, or you can save it as a word document and send it to us via email (swmonthly@gmail.com). Just send me a PM to me if you do send it there since I never check it. :P

Would it not be best to notify you what I want to do though? In case it's unsuitable/ out of place?

Just check with them once you have an idea because there is a chance someone else is doing it or its out of place:P.

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[QUOTE="Indie_Hitman"] Would it not be best to notify you what I want to do though? In case it's unsuitable/ out of place?

You don't have too, other members haven't done that and their pieces still made it into the magazine. It's a good precautionary measure however. I'd hate for you to work long and hard on something that gets rejected.
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[QUOTE="vguy555"]

since the challenge is over, can someone please PM me the answers, i'm having a hard time finding those stars. Thanks!

789shadow

I'll send you my winning answers. :P

Thanks, I got them. The stars were very well hidden, even with the answers I had trouble spotting a few :P

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[QUOTE="789shadow"]

[QUOTE="vguy555"]

since the challenge is over, can someone please PM me the answers, i'm having a hard time finding those stars. Thanks!

vguy555

I'll send you my winning answers. :P

Thanks, I got them. The stars were very well hidden, even with the answers I had trouble spotting a few :P

:twisted: I took pride in my work. I blame Batman: AA for giving this idea. :P

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#125 AdobeArtist  Moderator
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So, any discussion about anything besides the hidden stars at all? :)

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#126 Skittles_McGee
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[QUOTE="NVIDIATI"][QUOTE="Ibacai"]Hey, just because my review wasn't any good doesn't mean it can't be on the spread sheet, right? :(Ibacai
:lol: Sorry not all of the reviews are on the list, which review was it? and in which issue of SWM? I can add it if you like.

Pfft, no worries dude. It was my DA review in the March issue. It's really no big deal, just messing around with ya. :P

Don't forget my Darksiders review in... um... what was our first issue? >_>
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[QUOTE="Ibacai"][QUOTE="NVIDIATI"] :lol: Sorry not all of the reviews are on the list, which review was it? and in which issue of SWM? I can add it if you like.Skittles_McGee
Pfft, no worries dude. It was my DA review in the March issue. It's really no big deal, just messing around with ya. :P

Don't forget my Darksiders review in... um... what was our first issue? >_>

:lol: Anyways when (I mean "if" :P) I get accepted into SWM I'll make a spreadsheet thread so we can fix it up / make the proper additions.

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#128 Willy105
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So, any discussion about anything besides the hidden stars at all? :)

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Where's my reaction to E3!?! I'm pretty sure I had one.
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Great issue as always.

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#130 jg4xchamp
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NVIDAI my issue with the spreadsheet. I want all my reviews listed as no score. Although yes I would gladly give Bayo Triple-A. I prefer doing no scores with my review though. If we do need to adjust scores into this. Batman: AA was AA to me to be quite honest.
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#131 NVIDIATI
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NVIDAI my issue with the spreadsheet. I want all my reviews listed as no score. Although yes I would gladly give Bayo Triple-A. I prefer doing no scores with my review though. If we do need to adjust scores into this. Batman: AA was AA to me to be quite honest. jg4xchamp
If that's the case we should have some with scores and others as "NSN" No Score Needed. That way people don't have to give it a real value.

EDIT: The only reason I like the score is so the reader can have an idea if the reviewer had a positive experience with the game or a negative one. So maybe instead of a score for some we can have asimple thumbs up or thumbs down. Anyways nothing is set in stone as the spreadsheet needs some work, but we'll figure at some point if or when I get let into SWM.

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[QUOTE="jg4xchamp"]NVIDAI my issue with the spreadsheet. I want all my reviews listed as no score. Although yes I would gladly give Bayo Triple-A. I prefer doing no scores with my review though. If we do need to adjust scores into this. Batman: AA was AA to me to be quite honest. NVIDIATI

If that's the case we should have some with scores and others as "NSN" No Score Needed. That way people don't have to give it a real value.

EDIT: The only reason I like the score is so the reader can have an ideaif the reviewer had a positive experience with the game or a negative one. So maybe instead of a score for some we can have asimple thumbs up or thumbs down. Anyways nothing is set in stone as the spreadsheet needs some work, but we'll figure at some point if or when I get let into SWM.

I hate doing em, but this isn't the first time the scores thing has been brought up.

I guess I could force a score, but I was thinking we should all just ripoff Jethro, and end um with witty lines like the glorious Fable 2 review of his.

Vomit Inducing Abomination out of 10

:)

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#133 fabz_95
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[QUOTE="fabz_95"]

[QUOTE="NVIDIATI"]

Fixed!

*picture*

Also added some colour :P

SWM Review list Version 1.1:Download(If you don't have Excel 2007 click here)

NVIDIATI

Awesome dude. If you can keep updating this, you'll be a very useful SWM member (that is if you get in of course, bwahwahwah).

Forsure I'll have to fill in the gaps because I'm sure I've missed a couple of reviews. Also it would be great if everyone with a "???" could give it a real score for their review so I can add it.While I'm at it, what issue did you review Resident Evil 4?

I'm pretty sure it was December 2008.
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#134 fabz_95
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[QUOTE="AdobeArtist"]

So, any discussion about anything besides the hidden stars at all? :)

Willy105
Where's my reaction to E3!?! I'm pretty sure I had one.

There was a lot to render, I think Stevo intentionally missed out some reactions.
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#135 NVIDIATI
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[QUOTE="NVIDIATI"]

[QUOTE="jg4xchamp"]NVIDAI my issue with the spreadsheet. I want all my reviews listed as no score. Although yes I would gladly give Bayo Triple-A. I prefer doing no scores with my review though. If we do need to adjust scores into this. Batman: AA was AA to me to be quite honest. jg4xchamp

If that's the case we should have some with scores and others as "NSN" No Score Needed. That way people don't have to give it a real value.

EDIT: The only reason I like the score is so the reader can have an ideaif the reviewer had a positive experience with the game or a negative one. So maybe instead of a score for some we can have asimple thumbs up or thumbs down. Anyways nothing is set in stone as the spreadsheet needs some work, but we'll figure at some point if or when I get let into SWM.

I hate doing em, but this isn't the first time the scores thing has been brought up.

I guess I could force a score, but I was thinking we should all just ripoff Jethro, and end um with witty lines like the glorious Fable 2 review of his.

Vomit Inducing Abomination out of 10

:)

:lol: That would defiantly add some humor and originality to all the reviews...

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#136 NVIDIATI
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[QUOTE="fabz_95"][QUOTE="NVIDIATI"]

[QUOTE="fabz_95"] Awesome dude. If you can keep updating this, you'll be a very useful SWM member (that is if you get in of course, bwahwahwah).

Forsure I'll have to fill in the gaps because I'm sure I've missed a couple of reviews. Also it would be great if everyone with a "???" could give it a real score for their review so I can add it.While I'm at it, what issue did you review Resident Evil 4?

I'm pretty sure it was December 2008.

Alright, I'll put it in there.
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srry but there is way too much 360 coverage and not enough ps3
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where is the section for multiplat comparisions, the real stuff
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srry but there is way too much 360 coverage and not enough ps3NatalataN
The PS3 had nothing interesting this month. The 360 sucked this month, therefore it was fun to cover.
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[QUOTE="NatalataN"]biased editorial is biased. number of these editors have a history that doesnt just go away

It's an editorial, it's supposed to show a bias, because this is about System Wars.
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oh and its funny a magazine called SYSTEM WARS barely even touches upon systemsNatalataN
where is the section for multiplat comparisions, the real stuffNatalataN
So what do you want? More system discussion or multiplatform game coverage? Decide already.
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[QUOTE="NatalataN"]oh and its funny a magazine called SYSTEM WARS barely even touches upon systemsWilly105
where is the section for multiplat comparisions, the real stuffNatalataN
So what do you want? More system discussion or multiplatform game coverage? Decide already.

free samples and coupons plz
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I would gladly buy this in actual print form, it's a fully-fledged and realized magazine now, far from the newsletter it was a few years ago.

E3 time is always the most fun time of the year in gaming, so its no surprise SWM is no different. Grea issue.

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srry but there is way too much 360 coverage and not enough ps3NatalataN
Only one 360 game was covered in SWM this month... ?
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[QUOTE="NatalataN"]srry but there is way too much 360 coverage and not enough ps3Stevo_the_gamer
Only one 360 game was covered in SWM this month... ?

more then enough. with those AA and A scores let alone letting the E's out but thats just a matter of opinion these days at least until the agency, oh and FF forteen
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[QUOTE="Stevo_the_gamer"][QUOTE="NatalataN"]srry but there is way too much 360 coverage and not enough ps3NatalataN
Only one 360 game was covered in SWM this month... ?

more then enough. with those AA and A scores let alone letting the E's out but thats just a matter of opinion these days at least until the agency, oh and FF forteen

I'm not sure what you're even talking about. :?
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[QUOTE="Stevo_the_gamer"][QUOTE="NatalataN"]srry but there is way too much 360 coverage and not enough ps3NatalataN
Only one 360 game was covered in SWM this month... ?

more then enough. with those AA and A scores let alone letting the E's out but thats just a matter of opinion these days at least until the agency, oh and FF forteen

You've lost me.
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[QUOTE="Stevo_the_gamer"][QUOTE="NatalataN"]srry but there is way too much 360 coverage and not enough ps3NatalataN
Only one 360 game was covered in SWM this month... ?

more then enough. with those AA and A scores let alone letting the E's out but thats just a matter of opinion these days at least until the agency, oh and FF forteen

You could have replaced that with random words and it would have made more sense.