You have until Sunday night to finish, for I leave Monday morning and shall be gone fill about mid May or later.demoman_chaosI should be done Saturday. Sunday's my buffer day. Fear not, it will be done before you leave. At this point, I'm trying to decide whether chapter 6 will be the end or if I stick a chapter 7 on there.
Son, I am disappoint.Soniczero1993I'm two years older than you.
Join the club. I can name maybe two people I know online that I can guarantee don't care about that show.barren167But you know at least 1 that does. Honestly, I don't get why it is so addicting. It is just a well made cartoon with good messages and has legitimately funny moments.
The world is saved, Screech be ragin', Danial is still an ass, and Luke still has no screen time. I say a pretty good ending.Soniczero1993That'd be where I come in. Probably later today, to give phc time for anything else he might want. One minor detail about the plot: I actually established Shad as a demon back when Luke had his psychological underworld thing going around, he got to be Luke's host for a while. Of course, that's easily retconned, so I say leave it.
I'm curious why Danial is liberty.Soniczero1993loljustcause
When I first did that stuff, I really didn't actually out too much thought into it. I was just like "this character fits this idea, kind of" and was trying to do something similar to what's actually in the book Paradise Lost, since I was reading it for class at the time, and give ideas a physical form (like Sin and Death from the book). In the end, I really didn't mean to much by it, though it was a way for Peter to clearly see who and/or what his choices would be siding with/effecting the most. I wanted to have Peter actually thinking about help Tomas with his plans with the mutants, but also thinking of the other factions out there, even though some of the characters I picked had little to do with that kind of stuff.
I'd read it, but I'm satisfied with how phc ended it to really want to attempt. That, and he literally did nothing to warrant me to read it.
You took out one whole thing. My god, I'm amazed you even did that. Even though the guy who operates it is still kind of alive, off to kill you.
Not much of a win when the only path for you now is death, and they probably escaped with it to reactivate it one day.
As phc wrote this and not you, you are non-canon.Soniczero1993As I am officially a contributer to this story (as established by the story's beginning when it invited everyone to take part in writing the story) and phc merely happens to be finishing it because no one else wanted to bother (though I'm willing to fill in blank spaces), it's about as canonical as you'll get, given that this entire world is nothing more than text in this topic and in Google Docs.
Lies, all lies.
Besides, it still doesn't change the fact you didn't do anything. I played a role, kj played a role, phc played a role, and I'm willing to admit kj and phc were even more involved than I was. But Luke was just for background or if Danial needed someone to do something for him, like the one time he helped him and never showed up again.
And thus, my part was what affected everything, so I are happy.
Anyway, I've got not one, but TWO evil people for next RPG. And trust me, they are far worse than Screech ever will be. Not in power, but personality. Two dark twin sisters that may end up creeping everyone in the RPG out. But at least they are interesting.
As phc wrote this and not you, you are non-canon.Soniczero1993Not even close. What I wrote was:
So much of what you and your characters did was off the main plotlines that any sort of wrap up I would write for them wouldn't advance the action of this little mini novel conclusion thing I'm doing.meAlso, recall that Daro showed up in chapter 5, triggering that mexican standoff Danial walked into. [QUOTE="s0"]You took out one whole thing. My god, I'm amazed you even did that. Even though the guy who operates it is still kind of alive, off to kill you. Not much of a win when the only path for you now is death, and they probably escaped with it to reactivate it one day. Even though I left those details wide open, that was only because fleshing them out would have bogged down the action. I actually had originally written a bit more dialogue where Luke brags about having destroyed Armageddon, thrashing the base, and then says "remember the name Luke when you try this again" or something cheesy like that. Unfortunately, those sections were from Polly's perspective, which meant there was no way she'd be able to hear the other end of the conversation. Trust me, though, Luke and co. pretty thoroughly ravaged/destroyed the place (at least, as I envisioned it). Remember that Chapter 7 takes place days after Chapter 6. Would it be like Screech to just go back to his base and sulk for days, especially if the place was still operational? Hell no. He (and Snively) have lost months if not years of work. They're going to be out of commission for a long, long time.
I was moderately shocked Armageddon was still going, since Screech kind of shut it down. Mostly because everyone was going to die, especially when Danial realised Sirvanna was going to be roasted.
Honestly I think I like the Peter bits the most. The sense of darkness and dread Thomas had going was beyond what Screech was doing.
Mesa gonna need to give Screech a few upgrades for next RPG. That way my new villains won't absolutely destroy him. I'm kind of interested in what everyone else does if they decide to bring in their old characters.
I may have to keep in mind that this isn't my story Unholy Crusade and that I'll have to work around how the powers are gonna work (long story short, it involves the world being destroyed by two young women, at least in the later chapters). On top of that, I wanna change Sirvanna's backstory a bit, as well as Screech's relationship to Danial. I'm also gonna see if I can get Sirvanna to fight alongside Danial like she does in my story.
All in all, Danial will probably behave like he did here, but differently to Screech. And when I post my characters for next RPG, my two new ones' bios will actually be morphed together, since there's literally no change between their lives since they went through everything together.
Also, yes, they are mystic, my first ones actually for this set of RPGs. You can have a lot more fun using those powers than the limitations I abide to for science.
To answer Mariostar's questionssonicphcI knew Mario was going to come back,looks like I won ten bucks.
*Has no idea whats going on*
[QUOTE="SuperSmashBro1"]I knew Mario was going to come back,looks like I won ten bucks.[QUOTE="sonicphc"]To answer Mariostar's questionssonicphc
*Has no idea whats going on*
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