Ok, then you have two huge problems. Everything looks like it is being shot away from the middle, and I didn't even notice the two "eyeballs" until you pointed them out.
1) It's really not your fault that you brought this one because no one gave you any bad criticism on it, but it isn't all that good. It's very flat and a bit boring. There isn't anything technically wrong with it, but it just isn't all that interesting. Mod. 2) It's very bright, vibrant, and fun. This is very nice to look at. I love your strong color choices, and the effects you use are always cool. The blurred effects do seem a bit bad at first, but I think they do help break up the chaos, and they bring my eyes back up to the focal. I think the top border could have been done better. Low Inter 3) It think it's pretty cool. Everything seems to fit. I'm kind of a sucker for all of these digitalish effects, and I like the Crownzero C4D (even though it's crazy overused, probably because it's so useful). I think the empty space on the top left could have been filled with a bit more wireframe stuff, but I might be wrong on that. Don't trust me. :P Low Inter. 4) While these shadows are better than the first one you used, the hair on the blue girl is pretty LQ. (Either that or that girl seriously gotta get her hair did). The effects are very cool, and the colors are very cool, but I think you left the wall texture a little too heavy. Maybe clearing some of that smog would make the piece more eye-catching. I really don't like that blue girl though. Low Inter. 5) This is the f*cking business. Probably the most kickass thing I've seen in this union in a long time. Colors and effects are spot on, and everything looks pretty damned perfect. I'd say the bottom is a bit too chaotic for the middle though, but I'm giving this High Inter. *bleh* So overall, Mod.
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