AbsractSpace

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Decided to go abstract for this after I couldn't find a render to put in this thing.

needs more wide lens flare;BrunoBRS

@Jenkins-Why so many?HybridKing

You know what else I don't get? An answet for my stupid question.HybridKing

needs more wide lens flare;BrunoBRS

[QUOTE="BrunoBRS"]needs more wide lens flare;Dudersaper

Oh yeah you did tell me about that, forgot lol

Soooo....anyone ellse wanna give their or is Dahui the only one I have to thank for giving his opinion? :P

[QUOTE="BrunoBRS"]needs more wide lens flare;Dudersaper

Oh yeah you did tell me about that, forgot lol

Soooo....anyone ellse wanna give their or is Dahui the only one I have to thank for giving his opinion? :P

 

 

 

HybridKing

No need to thank me, it was terrible critique. 

I made it to be an abstract piece, so if thats how you viewed it, no problem, its designed to be debateable :PHybridKing

I wasn't looking at it in any meaningful way, that's literally what I saw. How long did this take you, and what steps did you take. I'm sure it's not just 3 c4ds slapped together, but I can't really see much else. This could mean you did your job so well though I don't see the work that's gone in to it. 

I think this would be better as an LP or at least a larger size.Mr_Jenkins

[QUOTE="HybridKing"]I made it to be an abstract piece, so if thats how you viewed it, no problem, its designed to be debateable :Pdahui58

I wasn't looking at it in any meaningful way, that's literally what I saw. How long did this take you, and what steps did you take. I'm sure it's not just 3 c4ds slapped together, but I can't really see much else. This could mean you did your job so well though I don't see the work that's gone in to it. 

1. The effects were all gathering/or being pulled to that bright light in the middle.

2.The two bubbles in the middle were to act as eyes to suggest even in space, someone/something is watching you.

Idk if I managed to pull that off but those were my intentions :P

@Jenkins-I thought about it for a while, I honestly can't remember why I chose that size lol

@Ani-Wasn't going for flow but thanks :P

What pd said. You've got to remember if you've got an idea you need to portray it to the viewer as well, if you are going in with the mindframe that you know there are two eyes there you will spot them instantly. At the moment though unless you don't know about the eyes its unlikely they will stand out, or someone will recognise what they're supposed to be, as they're quite difficult to spot surrounded by other circles, just looks like part of the bubble c4d!

I think this could benefit from blacking out the edges, that would draw attention to the centre eyes a bit more, as well as keep up with your 'drawing to the centre theme', would make it look like light is being pulled in as well maybe. Also it would just improve depth and compo in general imo.

edit: I'd also experiment with blurring the outside and sharpening the eyes (or maybe just leaving them)

What pd said. You've got to remember if you've got an idea you need to portray it to the viewer as well, if you are going in with the mindframe that you know there are two eyes there you will spot them instantly. At the moment though unless you don't know about the eyes its unlikely they will stand out, or someone will recognise what they're supposed to be, as they're quite difficult to spot surrounded by other circles, just looks like part of the bubble c4d!

I think this could benefit from blacking out the edges, that would draw attention to the centre eyes a bit more, as well as keep up with your 'drawing to the centre theme', would make it look like light is being pulled in as well maybe. Also it would just improve depth and compo in general imo.

edit: I'd also experiment with blurring the outside and sharpening the eyes (or maybe just leaving them)

dahui58