Jas0n94's forum posts

Avatar image for Jas0n94
Jas0n94

3990

Forum Posts

0

Wiki Points

124

Followers

Reviews: 15

User Lists: 0

#1 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts
Cool concept. Keep working on it. It has great potential.
Avatar image for Jas0n94
Jas0n94

3990

Forum Posts

0

Wiki Points

124

Followers

Reviews: 15

User Lists: 0

#2 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts

What everyone else said basically. I will just leave this here:

REMOVE THE TEXT OUTLINE  

Avatar image for Jas0n94
Jas0n94

3990

Forum Posts

0

Wiki Points

124

Followers

Reviews: 15

User Lists: 0

#3 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts
For some reason the first one seems better to me. It's clean...
Avatar image for Jas0n94
Jas0n94

3990

Forum Posts

0

Wiki Points

124

Followers

Reviews: 15

User Lists: 0

#4 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts
I don't like the black space on the center. Either cover it with some effects or flip it horizontally.
Avatar image for Jas0n94
Jas0n94

3990

Forum Posts

0

Wiki Points

124

Followers

Reviews: 15

User Lists: 0

#5 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts
The second one is better. The depth is "more" correct. Not a big fan of the whole piece though. I think you could use the perspective of the wall better.
Avatar image for Jas0n94
Jas0n94

3990

Forum Posts

0

Wiki Points

124

Followers

Reviews: 15

User Lists: 0

#6 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts
All of them are pretty nice. The fourth one is my favorite. I think you should try something beyond anime-girls based content though.
Avatar image for Jas0n94
Jas0n94

3990

Forum Posts

0

Wiki Points

124

Followers

Reviews: 15

User Lists: 0

#7 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts
The last one is great. Good to see you again on board Boba! :D
Avatar image for Jas0n94
Jas0n94

3990

Forum Posts

0

Wiki Points

124

Followers

Reviews: 15

User Lists: 0

#8 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts
Textless version is amazing. I like how you created depth with the spheres c4d.
Avatar image for Jas0n94
Jas0n94

3990

Forum Posts

0

Wiki Points

124

Followers

Reviews: 15

User Lists: 0

#9 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts
I like the composition of it. However, you have to work on the colours, lighting, atmosphere and ohjesuschristgetridofthiseffingtextunlesstheguypaidyoumillionstohaveit
Avatar image for Jas0n94
Jas0n94

3990

Forum Posts

0

Wiki Points

124

Followers

Reviews: 15

User Lists: 0

#10 Jas0n94
Member since 2008 • 3990 Posts
Although I agree with the things people said, I don't think they are so important so that you have to change it. My only complaint is the focal placement. I have an issue with cropped heads. :P