pspitus presents: A Zero's Tale

As far as I can tell (and I might be wrong), there are three guys and two girls. Tell me, how exactly is this going to work? :P twilightlullaby

Very good job, pspitus! :D I think you have Aidan down quite well. Except that he doesn't say "bro." Courtney817

True dat. I'd say "man" or "dude." I think you really got Red down, though. :D Your development of that Jet Evil character... meh, I'd say he needs some work. He's flat and boring and should probably be written out of the story :lol: Otherwise, great job :D

As far as I can tell (and I might be wrong), there are three guys and two girls. Tell me, how exactly is this going to work? :P twilightlullaby

Very good job, pspitus! :D I think you have Aidan down quite well. Except that he doesn't say "bro." Courtney817

True dat. I'd say "man" or "dude." I think you really got Red down, though. :D Your development of that Jet Evil character... meh, I'd say he needs some work. He's flat and boring and should probably be written out of the story :lol: Otherwise, great job :D

[QUOTE="twilightlullaby"]As far as I can tell (and I might be wrong), there are three guys and two girls. Tell me, how exactly is this going to work? :P red0584

LOL .......... :lol:

I have said it before and I will say it again... you two are peas in a pod....

A warped, rotten pod, of course :P

Aren't there like...5...peas in most pods? :?Marrium1

You can cook pea pods...

[QUOTE="Marrium1"]Aren't there like...5...peas in most pods? :?pspitus

Me, Red... a few hot chicks... (GIRLS, not chickens... :roll: )

[QUOTE="Marrium1"]Aren't there like...5...peas in most pods? :?pspitus

Red and Aidan agree on almost everything and have the same gross sense of humor. As far as I'm concerned, they are the only two peas in their little pod. But pspitus and Marrium are most likely in different pods on the same plant. ...My goodness, I think that's enough of this silly pea analogy :lol:

Alright, here's the next chapter of A Zero's Tale Chapter Three: Hot Fiery Passion. Can you guys guess who the premiere character is just by reading the title? :P Anyways hope you guys enjoy it, writing sure does take up a lot of time, oh well I think it's fun.And if you're wondering why I didn't post it here, it's because the file is way to large to be posted as a comment. :( Oh well. There has to be a limit right? :D

Great job, pspitus! :D

I read the whole thing :D

1. Cuz I'm in it :P
2. You know how to tell a good story.
3. You're one of my best friends on GS and I have to support you ;)

I still can't believe I actually got a fan! :D

I still can't believe I actually got a fan! :Dred0584

If pspitus would mention my good looks more often, then I would have more fans :x

[QUOTE="red0584"] I still can't believe I actually got a fan! :DAidan129

If pspitus would mention my good looks more often, then I would have more fans :x

I dunno 'bout that but I know you and pspitus are filled w/ PURE AWESOMENESS:D[QUOTE="Aidan129"]

[QUOTE="red0584"] I still can't believe I actually got a fan! :Dth3d3c3ption

If pspitus would mention my good looks more often, then I would have more fans :x

Alright, I'm still thinking about some ideas for the next chapter, but I want your input on this. Red is going to be meeting a certain special someone, and I'm wondering if you guys want him to be....

a) rejected

or 

b) accepted

Be careful of what you choose, this will have a dramatic effect on the story, and possibly other characters as well. :P

I say B. :P It's only because I'm in a benevolent mood today. Don't get any ideas.

I'll pick B, too! ;)

[QUOTE="Aidan129"] If pspitus would mention my good looks more often, then I would have more fans :xpspitus

For Aidan, how good he looks is always a concern to him. Keep that in mind for character development ;)

He said reverse psychology.  That means...he's gonna do the opposite!  :shock:

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