i made this up for zelda

don't comment until after you read the whole thing

Story: Vatii makes deal with Gannon to break Gannon out of mastersword Gannon gives Vatii some power to break out of foursword. Link has to stop Vatii so he gets foursword back together again and tries to stop him then a mysterious figure comes out of nowhere and saves Vatii, latter in the fight he saves Link. Vatii frees Gannon but Gannon betrays him. So Link teams up with Vatii. Mysterious figure turns out to be Vatii from future to keep the future the same and gives Vatii the rod of seasons before going back to his own time. Now Link sets out to fix master sword, Vatii to find rod of ages, and Zelda (who has light arrows) sets out to find silver arrows. They then fight Gannon who now saved enough power not breaking out of master sword that it doesn't help. So they find magic sword, rod of secrets, and golden bow. They then fuse their magic weapons together to make the golden sword, the golden rod, and the golden arrows. They are able to beat Gannon but the real enemy is shadow Link (who has appeared in every dungeon before) who use double versions of every item he fought Link with and after being defeated he uses his dark force of courage, then makes a shadow Zelda appear and takes her dark force of wisdom, and takes the real Gannon's Triforce of power to turn into some many armed awesome monster thing. When Link defeats that he finds Link from the future there and future Link then goes back to his time.

this is only a summary of what is my idea if you like it i will continue updating it

If you're pitching an idea for a Zelda game it's not bad, certainly not any worse than most official titles in the series :P

If you're trying to actually make a story out of that (the only reason I could see why you don't just post it all at once) you're not fleshing it out at all and you could put a lot more detail in.

I personally think it borrows way too many elements from previous Zelda games, and that's what I usually don't like about fan-fiction. How about something more original ?

And I'm not too sure about all the betraying and plot twists. I love complicated stories, but I prefer my Legend of Zelda to remain simple. :P

Woah wait a minute, Vatii makes a deal with Ganon to remove the Master Sword from him even though Ganon can't speak from underneath the stone taht covers him and that the Master Sword's locking his spirit? Plus Vatii removes the Master Sword even though it's the blade of Evil's bane? Not to mention that the Master Sword is the one who choses it's wielder :P. No offence but the beginning is already messed up.

no he broke the master sword much like the piccori blade in minish cap and vatii was in the forsaken realm with gannoncms

The Picori Blade and the Master Sword are 2 different things. Heck Ganondorf was only able to lower the power of the Master Sword by killing the sages but not destroy it (Wind Waker).

oh and you meet navi as a great fairy along with the light fairy from MM (i can't remember her name). elso, tKoRL, that old man from the first zelda, sharasha from LttP (i think that's his name), the owl from alot of games, and minda are great spirits. of coarse a desendant of epona for the horse.

How can Vatii have enough power to break the Master Sword and Gannondorf have enough to break the picori sword? That means both can solve the others problem, yet not take care of their own. That seems strange.

I find the idea creative, however a little too complicated. The fact that you put together three bad guys is not good, and a lot of it makes little sence. Vaati and Link cooperating? Shadow Link being more powerful than Gannondorf? It is not a bad idea, but I have heard better.