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#1 ShadowofSonic
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Do you ever feel like writing short stories?

Do you clog up 'Off Topic' threads?

Do you need cash now?!

--Then post them here! I'll kick it off.

In is winter-time. The earth wears a snowy garment, and looks like marble hewn out of the rock; the air is bright and clear; the wind is sharp as a well-tempered sword, and the trees stand like branches of white coral or blooming almond twigs, and here it is keen as on the lofty Alps.

The night is splendid in the gleam of the Northern Lights, and in the glitter of innumerable twinkling stars.

But we sit in the warm room, by the hot stove, and talk about the old times. And we listen to this story:

By the open sea was a giant's grave; and on the grave-mound sat at midnight the spirit of the buried hero, who had been a king. The golden circlet gleamed on his brow, his hair fluttered in the wind, and he was clad in steel and iron. He bent his head mournfully, and sighed in deep sorrow, as an unquiet spirit might sigh.

And a ship came sailing by. Presently the sailors lowered the anchor and landed. Among them was a singer, and he approached the royal spirit, and said,

"Why mournest thou, and wherefore dost thou suffer thus?"

And the dead man answered,

"No one has sung the deeds of my life; they are dead and forgotten. Song doth not carry them forth over the lands, nor into the hearts of men; therefore I have no rest and no peace."

And he spoke of his works, and of his warlike deeds, which his contemporaries had known, but which had not been sung, because there was no singer among his companions.

Then the old bard struck the strings of his harp, and sang of the youthful courage of the hero, of the strength of the man, and of the greatness of his good deeds. Then the face of the dead one gleamed like the margin of the cloud in the moonlight. Gladly and of good courage, the form arose in splendor and in majesty, and vanished like the glancing of the northern light. Nought was to be seen but the green turfy mound, with the stones on which no Runic record has been graven; but at the last sound of the harp there soared over the hill, as though he had fluttered from the harp, a little bird, a charming singing-bird, with ringing voice of the thrush, with the moving voice pathos of the human heart, with a voice that told of home, like the voice that is heard by the bird of passage. The singing-bird soared away, over mountain and valley, over field and wood--he was the Bird of Popular Song, who never dies.

We hear his song--we hear it now in the room while the white bees are swarming without, and the storm clutches the windows. The bird sings not alone the requiem of heroes; he sings also sweet gentle songs of love, so many and so warm, of Northern fidelity and truth. He has stories in words and in tones; he has proverbs and snatches of proverbs; songs which, like Runes laid under a dead man's tongue, force him to speak; and thus Popular Song tells of the land of his birth.

In the old heathen days, in the times of the Vikings, the popular speech was enshrined in the harp of the bard.

In the days of knightly castles, when the strongest fist held the scales of justice, when only might was right, and a peasant and a dog were of equal importance, where did the Bird of Song find shelter and protection? Neither violence nor stupidity gave him a thought.

But in the gabled window of the knightly castle, the lady of the castle sat with the parchment roll before her, and wrote down the old recollections in song and legend, while near her stood the old woman from the wood, and the travelling peddler who went wandering through the country. As these told their tales, there fluttered around them, with twittering and song, the Bird of Popular Song, who never dies so long as the earth has a hill upon which his foot may rest.

And now he looks in upon us and sings. Without are the night and the snow-storm. He lays the Runes beneath our tongues, and we know the land of our home. Heaven speaks to us in our native tongue, in the voice of the Bird of Popular Song. The old remembrances awake, the faded colors glow with a fresh lustre, and story and song pour us a blessed draught which lifts up our minds and our thoughts, so that the evening becomes as a Christmas festival.

The snow-flakes chase each other, the ice cracks, the storm rules without, for he has the might, he is lord--but not the LORD OF ALL.

It is winter time. The wind is sharp as a two-edged sword, the snow-flakes chase each other; it seems as though it had been snowing for days and weeks, and the snow lies like a great mountain over the whole town, like a heavy dream of the winter night. Everything on the earth is hidden away, only the golden cross of the church, the symbol of faith, arises over the snow grave, and gleams in the blue air and in the bright sunshine.

And over the buried town fly the birds of heaven, the small and the great; they twitter and they sing as best they may, each bird with his beak.

First comes the band of sparrows: they pipe at every trifle in the streets and lanes, in the nests and the houses; they have stories to tell about the front buildings and the back buildings.

"We know the buried town," they say; "everything living in it is piep! piep! piep!"

The black ravens and crows flew on over the white snow.

"Grub, grub!" they cried. "There's something to be got down there; something to swallow, and that's most important. That's the opinion of most of them down there, and the opinion is goo-goo-good!"

The wild swans come flying on whirring pinions, and sing of the noble and the great, that will still sprout in the hearts of men, down in the town which is resting beneath its snowy veil.

No death is there--life reigns yonder; we hear it on the notes that swell onward like the tones of the church organ, which seize us like sounds from the elf-hill, like the songs of Ossian, like the rushing swoop of the wandering spirits' wings. What harmony! That harmony speaks to our hearts, and lifts up our souls! It is the Bird of Popular Song whom we hear.

And at this moment the warm breath of heaven blows down from the sky. There are gaps in the snowy mountains, the sun shines into the clefts; spring is coming, the birds are returning, and new races are coming with the same home sounds in their hearts.

Hear the story of the year: "The night of the snow-storm, the heavy dream of the winter night, all shall be dissolved, all shall rise again in the beauteous notes of the Bird of Popular Song, who never dies!"

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#2 stephenage
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This thread is a great idea.
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#3 nintendo_warrio
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Looking forward to what will come out of this thread.
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#4 apitz_hnu90
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Oh yeah, should stick this thread.
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#5 ShadowofSonic
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Those damn writing classes better be paying off. :P
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#6 ikhzo
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Oh yeah, should stick this thread.apitz_hnu90

No please... 

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#7 bob_toeback
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[QUOTE="apitz_hnu90"]Oh yeah, should stick this thread.ikhzo

No please... 

why..?

I love to write, mostly poetry/stream of conscience.

I havent read the first post but I will :P

This one was recent, I wrote it after sleeping or meditating, I dont know

What Happened?

I remember hearing
that Buddy Holly died,
after the Surf
they crashed into the
ocean.
Was it going to be
the song about the
music that wouldn't
play?
Or how Rock and Roll Heaven
had seemed so far away.
Possibly Peggy Sue
walking around town
with nothing to do.
But I slipped into
a world of volcanic
structure.
Distant lands
and far away places
and like a flash
I was back
returning to present
form
and wondering
what happened.

sun

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#8 bob_toeback
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@Sonic - Just read your story and really enjoyed it. Its very atmospheric and well written. It really created a world, reminds me of Skyrim of course, but it is its own thing. Good job

I'll post another:

Infinity

People come & go
But shall never enter nor leave.
They stare off in every vast direction
And set a course
In this sea and infinite arcade
They reach the shore and make their decisions
And set their dependence independable
While they tear at banners, and choose their path.
There are no bars to hold within this eternity
And they take what they want
When they want it
For yo-yos repel the world.

And now a ping pong table
To serve the singing song
And a lingering for-long
That all but belong
To the eastern shooby doo
As  Scooby and the gang
Solve mysteries
And catch the wrong
And find wind to surround
Circles of living life
While all these billings and strife
Talk to the willing wife
And the mill- hinge and my digging sift
To sell the wide walls
And side halls
To abide by laws
And a racket of notice
Letter of placement
To show all the boat-less
That they don't have a basement
To paint pictures on the door frames
The saint lectures Bon the Boar Raines
While he lifts his chores for maims

 

    So Swash Buckle
    Makes it there in time
    To proudly announce to the world
    that he would wish
    His toes
    To ring a-glow
    And his toe nails to grow

 

For a view of the ticket machine
as the fountain of youth
For it always resets to 0
And will never run out
As it funnels inward to seek landscapes
And listens to the music it wishes
Rather than that of which is programmed itself
We sit amongst the laundry mat
To shoot nickles
And lift sandwiches and thus melt downed
Waterflow
Riding bikes up hills
Too steep to count
And down valley edges and streams
Too low to revel a sound

 

You don't walk home, for home
is a thing of the past
And it would be too far
To begin with
Rather you forge snowmen in the fiery furnace
A blade of macho collusion and
Forced-to-be-reckoned-with confusion
For a mass illusion of birds & doves
For all that there is
Is simple things above
And simple things below
And that is all you have
To know when it comes to
Skipping stones in the back draft
And laugh tracks
That queue life and love
And humanity as a whole
In a distant plane
And a piercing sound to all but your ears
To re-compensate you
For your fulfilled, or
Lack there of
fears
And who is King Lear?
A man of musty cures
With only beers
And a wagon, and man to steer
For the walking of those and they're near
A shadow of the sear lost
And the hark you hear

 

    'Now come hither mere mortal
    And I shall grant one wish
    To you and  the life's world'

 

And Stanley had died
In 1999
Because of the possible
Future he'd fore-told in his movies
and how things work

Continue down the line and on the railroad. Railroad crossings. Cross walks. Stop signs, go signs. Red green lighted. As you track across the universe on a silver lined raft of unconscious rifts and raves. Sinking buckets down the well, to gather water for the week watchers. And the hall monitors. An ode to teachings and fallings. For everyone shall chew you up, and everyone shall spit you back out in a world too bright to even visibly appear to look at, for one instance or another. As you re-adjust and find time to look at the surface of this planet, and all those that surround it. And fall to a deep coral, for all there is the determined time itself. In a turn dial of any one clock, counter clock wise, is counter wise to be said for this and that. Walk any distance, while living in hotels forever. The lights flicker but there is always someone working. Swimming pools and rec rooms. The smell of chlorine in a newly furnished house.

So you lay at the mouth of your life, and you awaken refreshed to be alive and living life to all lives you've had. The many chosen the many not. And your still playing baseball because you can, and not even because you want to anymore. This orbit is all that matters, and all that has become of you. As per usual you see cosmos and raging whirlpools to suck the hair off of your head and plant it in the floor. Grass growing over pastures while cows off and stare for what there is and give thanks around a supper table while passing the carrots and ribs. They talk of their lives, and how far they have come. How they have built space ships and nuke plants, and automobiles to replace the carriage, and hot air balloons as a form of aeroplane, all the accomplishments in ways to put down what they've seen into a neatly formed book, to take fake trees to replace those that they have in their forests they never visit, and their shoes and socks and head gear and goggles that help see through walls and ordinary wall calendars to sell the day, and potato chips and fancy crayons to color in pictures of themselves.

Infinity in every direction
And no steps to be had
There is space beyond these walls
And whistles that hang from the ceiling
Playing themselves
Planetariums are not for the faint of heart

 

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#9 bugbag
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Very nice writings Bob and Sonic.:D

My new novel is coming along nicely. I'm about 10,000 words in, and I'm putting everything I have learned in my life into it. I need to contact a publisher soon to see if they would be interested in helping me share it with the world. That's my only problem, I want to make sure people read this.

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#10 bob_toeback
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Thanks, and thats cool. Wish you luck. Thats a lot of words to put into a story xD not sure I could do it. Hope you can get it published though, thatd be pretty sweet :D
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#11 ShadowofSonic
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Whoa, forgot about this thread. Guess I should write something, soon. :P
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#12 bugbag
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I might start writing stuff again soon.:P
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#13 ShadowofSonic
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I might start writing stuff again soon.:Pbugbag
I've never seen you post here. :x
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#14 ShadowofSonic
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Y U NO POST HERE?!
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#15 ShadowofSonic
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Y U NO POST HERE?!
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#16 bugbag
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I'll try to write up something soon.:P

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#17 Kman5507
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Does soon count as now? Can I be part of it? :P
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#18 bugbag
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I wasn't planning on doing something like that. Just a short five paragraph story.:P

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#19 ShadowofSonic
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I've always wanted to see Bugbag's writing skills.
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#20 Kman5507
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I think he's written some stories in his blogs before. You can look for those.
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#21 ShadowofSonic
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:| They are ok..
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#22 bugbag
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They sucked.:P I've improved a lot since then.
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#23 Kman5507
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Prove it :P

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#24 bugbag
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Prove it :P

Kman5507
I will when I have the time.:P