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Here's why this article is wrong. As fans, there is absolutely nothing wrong with showing displeasure in something that we have invested a significant amount of time into. The petition is simply a way of doing so. We have every right to criticize the content of the games that we play. You listed a few examples of pieces of revered art and literature, asking what the world would be like if the author's and artists changed their pieces due to criticism. I ask you this; What if those examples you listed had major, objective flaws? That's what the fans want to see fixed. As a writer, you should know the basic layout for a story or essay. The introduction establishes a foundation/thesis and foreshadows what's coming next (Mass effect 1 and parts of 2) The body forms the bulk of the content, drawing the audience in and involving them in the world you've created (1, 2, and most of 3) The conclusion, and this is important, recaps. No new characters or ideas are introduced, events are wrapped up and questions are answered.MINOR SPOILER NEXT. NO SPECIFICS. Since this game is supposed to be the definitive end of Shepard's story, no questions should be left. Instead of doing this with the last 5 minutes of their game, Bioware introduced a new character and idea and then tried to change the events proceeding the ending in their entirety. END SPOILER Fans aren't only mad because they didn't like the conclusion. They're also mad because it was just objectively poor writing.