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#1 BigDaddy878
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Did you read it? I dont mind if people dont read it but if they want to I'm happy with that as well.
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#2 BigDaddy878
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It is called Breakout: The Other World

If you dont like it, please say so and if you do, please say so as well

If there r mistakes, sorry but i was using notepad

Breakout: The Other World

Description:

You are a 26 year old man named Jared and you are an inventor trying to invent something that no one else has ever thought of before: a serince. A serince is a device that can take the user to any place that is not know to exist, and all the user has to do is dream it up, and push the serince button. If it works the way it is supposed to, then the user should be taken to the place they thought of, unharmed, and stay there for 48 hours. After the 48 hours, the user should return to the base, and they can use the serince once again in one week.

On March 12, 2056, Jared has completed the project. It had taken him12 years to finish, and he finally did... at least he thought he did. Jared always wanted to go to somewhere different, somewhere not in this galaxy, not in this UNIVERSE. He wanted to go to a completly different world. He wanted to go to Hephasitus. Hephasitus was a place of beauty and freedom, based on his dreams, and was unlike the world he lived in today, what with all the violence and wars going on. People cannot even leave their houses without being afraid of dying in the place he lives in today. However, in Hephasitus, there were angels, wildlife, children playing and laughing, people on the streets, and no crime activity. Finally, as he dreamed up the place and pressed the serince button, something went wrong. The room shaked and the machine started to make loud noises. Jared did not know what went wrong, for he spent so much time analyzing it. However, he was still transported to Hephasitus, but with a weird feel to his body, and the world was nothing like he thought it would be. In fact, it was the complete opposite. Demons and devils flooded the place, children were killing, and the people on the streets carried weapons, killing anything in their way. The violence in Hephasitus was much worse than on Earth... the weapons were unlike any ever seen before back home. Some would created a huge portal leaking out hundereds of demons, and others would destroy anything in a one hundered foot radius. Blood was everywhere. Jared panicked and quickly looked for a path to safety, but there was no safe place. But then that strange feel to his body started to mentally and physically hurt Jared. He looked down at his legs only to see them gone, and yet he was not on the ground. He looked at his arms and they were scaly and transparent. Finally, he found a glass shard right next to him on the street, and tried to see a reflection of his face. He had no face but some sort of a grotesque image of something he had never seen before in his life. What was he?

Story: Unravel the truth about yourself and Hepahsitus. Why did the machine take you to the opposite of what you dreamt of after analyzing it for 7 years? Why have you changed? Will you return to your world after 48 hours, or will you stay here forever? Find out in "The Other World"

Gameplay:

-You have tranformed to something never before seen with a whole list of powers and a whole arsonel of weaponry. Use these powers and weapons to your advatage, not just to kill your enemies, but they serve a key part to unreviling the truth of Hephasitus and its Breakout.

- Choose between good and evil; - will you try to protect the world and use your powers and weapons mostly when need while you look for the answers behind this breakout, or will you destroy everything in your way, including the citizens, enjoying your new powers and ultimate arsenal, and using them to cause even more destruction then has already been caused? You Choose.

- No boundries; you can do anything you desire, go anywhere you desire, and kill or save anyone you desire.

Some of the powers;

- float up to 30 ft in the air

- use the four elements against your enemies

- transport to located areas of the world

- gruesomly kill anyone using mind controlwith the power of Evil ( ie. peel out someones eyes from a long distance)

- save the possesed and mishapen people of Hepahistus using the Power Of Light and curing them of the darkness inside them

and much much more

Tasks to be reviled soon

Some of the weapons;

-based on your decisions throughout the game, not only your body but also your your weapons will begin to transform into something new

Weapons will be revieled shortly