Game Development Association of NIU

Here's an article that I wrote about an organization I'm apart of in school.

http://christophergibbs.wordpress.com/2010/12/06/game-development-association-of-niu/

Two really bad sentences here:

"I told this to the veteran members like Michel and Brandon are welcoming to what the group is welcome to students of all majors"

"Kim Kline is a freshmen Art major and only female member is responsible for artwork the club's untitled project"

I think what you mean here is:

"I told this to the veteran members Michel and Brandon who said that the group is welcome to students of all majors"

"Kim Kline, a freshmen Art major and the only female member, is responsible for artwork the club's untitled project"

Otherwise well-written and it sounds like a really nice place to be. Wish they had something like that at my school.