Trying to master smudging (V2 UP lol title too long)

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#1 anihimz
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05holdmyliquor_zps8cddf1de.png It's SO HARDDDDDD V2: 05holdmyliquorV2_zps4d6f7703.png Added some more detail in the bg, clipping masks, and some foreground textures. Didn't want to overdo anything
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#2 HybridKing
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Is he in hell or something? :P

It feels...WIP-ish, like it needs more smudging. Besides that, and the obvious soft brushing I got no complaints.

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#3 anihimz
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I realized I forgot to add bubbles lol Curtis where do you think there should be more smudging
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#4 HybridKing
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I realized I forgot to add bubbles lol Curtis where do you think there should be more smudginganihimz
The parts where you smudged would be a good start. As it is, it looks like you smudged with a large brush (Large for a smudge sig anyway lol) and didn't bother adding in details to it. As a result it looks more like paper fire than smudging :P
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i really don't like how the background is kinda like a deformed mouth. i like the smudges themselves (especially the more edgy corners), but i don't like how there's smudging on top, smuding on the bottom, and nothing in between.

maybe make a back-background smudge layer that goes across that gap?

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#6 Dudersaper
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I actually really like it how it is.
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#7 anihimz
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i really don't like how the background is kinda like a deformed mouth. i like the smudges themselves (especially the more edgy corners), but i don't like how there's smudging on top, smuding on the bottom, and nothing in betweenBrunoBRS

Yeah I see what you mean. I was gonna add some more detail in the middle but I thought I might be overdoing it. I'll try and have an update up later today. Thanks everyone for the suggestions!

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#8 HybridKing
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Great, Ani gave a release date, you know what that means....
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#9 Full_Metal1923
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Great, Ani gave a release date, you know what that means....HybridKing

Make your pre-orders now?  

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#10 HybridKing
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[QUOTE="HybridKing"]Great, Ani gave a release date, you know what that means....Full_Metal1923

Make your pre-orders now?  

And hope it comes before 2150
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#11 Shadowchronicle
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[QUOTE="Full_Metal1923"]

[QUOTE="HybridKing"]Great, Ani gave a release date, you know what that means....HybridKing

Make your pre-orders now?  

And hope it comes before 2150

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#12 anihimz
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Bump for V2
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ooo now me like
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#14 BrunoBRS
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maybe a little too many sparkle things, but the changes in colors and the msudges are a big improvement.

i hadn't noticed before, but you made red's eyes... too red :P he's not freaking raiden :P

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#15 anihimz
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maybe a little too many sparkle things, but the changes in colors and the msudges are a big improvement.

i hadn't noticed before, but you made red's eyes... too red :P he's not freaking raiden :P

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Oh the super red eyes are part of the render lol Thank you everyone for the V2 suggestions now I know what to do better for my next smudge piece! :D