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#151 The_Last_Ride
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It was not; I was asking if that was all you picked up due to your reply to Woody's statement.ShadowofSonic

no it wasn't i am waiting for a reply 

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#152 ShadowofSonic
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I DUN LEIK WAITING

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I DUN LEIK WAITING

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I'm going to watch some spongebob now, this GIF got me in the mood.
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#154 ShadowofSonic
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Make sure to watch the early seasons! xD
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#155 The_Last_Ride
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i want to know what Woody meant by this
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#156 bugbag
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I think he meant organizing your review so you can make it longer without breaking the flow of reading.

Like instead of just doing good or bad, you need to cover the average, and all the additions/ideas.

For example, when I write reviews I normally start with presentation, then overview, story, content, graphics, gameplay, sound design and then the conclusion, some times changing it around to ease the flow of reading. Now doing a good/bad section isn't a bad thing, but personally I don't like using that. I feel like I should explain the different levels of bad and good. RE6's camera wasn't just bad, it was hideous. MGS4's story wasn't just good, it was spectacular.

You have the basic ideas, and with each review I'm seeing a bit more of detail. Just keep at it, try to explain how things work, what isn't good about those things, what is good, and see where the review takes you.

@Sonic Your post did sound a bit rude. I don't know if you intended it to be or not, but we need to respect each other here.

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#157 ShadowofSonic
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I RESPECTZ
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#158 The_Last_Ride
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I think he meant organizing your review so you can make it longer without breaking the flow of reading.

Like instead of just doing good or bad, you need to cover the average, and all the additions/ideas.

For example, when I write reviews I normally start with presentation, then overview, story, content, graphics, gameplay, sound design and then the conclusion, some times changing it around to ease the flow of reading. Now doing a good/bad section isn't a bad thing, but personally I don't like using that. I feel like I should explain the different levels of bad and good. RE6's camera wasn't just bad, it was hideous. MGS4's story wasn't just good, it was spectacular.

You have the basic ideas, and with each review I'm seeing a bit more of detail. Just keep at it, try to explain how things work, what isn't good about those things, what is good, and see where the review takes you.

@Sonic Your post did sound a bit rude. I don't know if you intended it to be or not, but we need to respect each other here.

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yeah i used to do that, but i think the good bad part might be better, but who knows. I have been watching Rev3games reviews, and they do it in that way. Though i started doing it before i even heard of them 

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#159 bugbag
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Like I say, everyone has their own way of writing.

I think I just like to talk about games. My Dishonored review was way longer than what it turned out to be because I just kept writing.:P

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#160 The_Last_Ride
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Like I say, everyone has their own way of writing.

I think I just like to talk about games. My Dishonored review was way longer than what it turned out to be because I just kept writing.:P

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Well i learn as i write stuff. My reviews keep getting longer and better compared to my earlier ones 

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#161 bugbag
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Yes they have. Like I said, keep at it.;)

I might do a review on Eternal Darkness.

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#162 WoodyBerlin
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Hey, exactly like bugbag wrote. If you like making a bad/good section. Simply write the review first with the tips we gave you (stated in bugbag's paragraph he wrote) and then make a good/bad section at the very last of the review or at the beginning depending on what you prefer. 
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#163 The_Last_Ride
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Hey, exactly like bugbag wrote. If you like making a bad/good section. Simply write the review first with the tips we gave you (stated in bugbag's paragraph he wrote) and then make a good/bad section at the very last of the review or at the beginning depending on what you prefer. WoodyBerlin

ok, might do that then 

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#164 Kman5507
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I, for one, prefer simplicity. I'd rather read the one page that says everything in simple terms than the five pages that extrapolate useless information.
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#165 ShadowofSonic
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I, for one, prefer simplicity. I'd rather read the one page that says everything in simple terms than the five pages that extrapolate useless information.Kman5507

I'll happily f**k you for using extrapolate. People don't use that word enough.

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#166 Kman5507
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Let's use it wherever we can! :D
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#167 The_Last_Ride
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I, for one, prefer simplicity. I'd rather read the one page that says everything in simple terms than the five pages that extrapolate useless information.Kman5507

I will try to do it better in my Revelations review 

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#168 ShadowofSonic
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Let's use it wherever we can! :DKman5507

Yes sir!

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#169 naju890_963
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http://www.gamespot.com/duke-nukem-3d-atomic-edition/user-reviews/810705/platform/pc/

Got to review Duke 3D, amazing game. 

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#170 ShadowofSonic
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I'm still emotionally scared from... from...
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#171 The_Last_Ride
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So here is my new try on a review on a game

Assassin's Creed Revelations

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#172 naju890_963
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I'm still emotionally scared from... from...ShadowofSonic
Strippers?
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#173 ShadowofSonic
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Duke Nuken Forever :cry:
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#174 Eikichi-Onizuka
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So here is my new try on a review on a game

Assassin's Creed Revelations

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Not bad. The format is better but it could still use an extra paragraph or two to go more into the gameplay. You mention the game has new weapons and doesn't copy/paste from the last game but then you say nothing else about them and what they add to the experience.
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#175 The_Last_Ride
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[QUOTE="The_Last_Ride"]

So here is my new try on a review on a game

Assassin's Creed Revelations

Eikichi-Onizuka

Not bad. The format is better but it could still use an extra paragraph or two to go more into the gameplay. You mention the game has new weapons and doesn't copy/paste from the last game but then you say nothing else about them and what they add to the experience.

ok, i will add it on later when i have time and thought what i can write 

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#176 bugbag
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Duke Nuken Forever :cry:ShadowofSonic
That's a really, really good... Joke of a game.:P It's crap.

@Naju Very nice review! Even though I dislike Duke Nukem, it was well written.:D

@TLR And I didn't expect such a big jump TLR. That review was pretty good. By the way, if you need any advice feel free to ask! I love discussing writing.:D

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#177 ShadowofSonic
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If you like discussing writing bug, WHY U NO READ MAI BLOGS?!  :cry:
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#178 bugbag
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If you like discussing writing bug, WHY U NO READ MAI BLOGS?! :cry:ShadowofSonic
I read the last one!:cry:

I just forget sometimes.:P

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#179 ShadowofSonic
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[QUOTE="ShadowofSonic"]If you like discussing writing bug, WHY U NO READ MAI BLOGS?! :cry:bugbag

I read the last one!:cry:

I just forget sometimes.:P

Even though you see them repeatedly in my sigs? :P

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#180 bugbag
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Sometimes I don't notice when it changes.:P
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#181 The_Last_Ride
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[QUOTE="ShadowofSonic"]Duke Nuken Forever :cry:bugbag

That's a really, really good... Joke of a game.:P It's crap.

@Naju Very nice review! Even though I dislike Duke Nukem, it was well written.:D

@TLR And I didn't expect such a big jump TLR. That review was pretty good. By the way, if you need any advice feel free to ask! I love discussing writing.:D

 

well i think it's my best so far 

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#182 ShadowofSonic
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[QUOTE="bugbag"]

[QUOTE="ShadowofSonic"]Duke Nuken Forever :cry:The_Last_Ride

That's a really, really good... Joke of a game.:P It's crap.

@Naju Very nice review! Even though I dislike Duke Nukem, it was well written.:D

@TLR And I didn't expect such a big jump TLR. That review was pretty good. By the way, if you need any advice feel free to ask! I love discussing writing.:D

 

well i think it's my best so far 

Duke Nukem Forever is your best game?! :o

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#183 The_Last_Ride
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[QUOTE="The_Last_Ride"][QUOTE="bugbag"]

[QUOTE="ShadowofSonic"]Duke Nuken Forever :cry:ShadowofSonic

That's a really, really good... Joke of a game.:P It's crap.

@Naju Very nice review! Even though I dislike Duke Nukem, it was well written.:D

@TLR And I didn't expect such a big jump TLR. That review was pretty good. By the way, if you need any advice feel free to ask! I love discussing writing.:D

 

well i think it's my best so far 

Duke Nukem Forever is your best game?! :o

no my best review 

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#184 bugbag
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^It is, nice work.;)
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#185 The_Last_Ride
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i also update AC 2 and AC BH review
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#186 naju890_963
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Sonic review.

http://www.gamespot.com/sonic-the-hedgehog/user-reviews/810955/ 

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#187 bugbag
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i also update AC 2 and AC BH reviewThe_Last_Ride

I forgot about this! I'll read both of your reviews next time I come online!

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#188 The_Last_Ride
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i put all my recent ones in my blog if you care, but i am thinking of doing AC 3 next
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#189 bugbag
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@Naju I remember playing one of the older Sonic games. I never really liked them, but nice review.;)

@TLR The AC2 review is pretty good, nice work.:D

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#190 The_Last_Ride
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thank you
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#191 The_Last_Ride
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Transformers: Fall of Cybertron Review
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#192 naju890_963
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http://www.gamespot.com/metal-slug-3/user-reviews/811398/platform/ps2/

Latest review.

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#193 bugbag
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Transformers: Fall of Cybertron ReviewThe_Last_Ride
You're improving.;)

@Naju That actually sounds quite fun... I wonder if I've played a Metal Slug game before.:?

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#194 The_Last_Ride
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thank you, i reviewed bad company, but it was shorter than the other because it is a shooter
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#195 bugbag
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Bad Company was a good game.:P
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#196 The_Last_Ride
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Here is my review

http://us.gamespot.com/battlefield-bad-company-2/user-reviews/811537/platform/xbox360/ 

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#197 bugbag
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I still need to play that.:P
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#198 The_Last_Ride
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going to do my review on Medal of Honor and Uncharted 1
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#199 naju890_963
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http://www.gamespot.com/metal-gear-rising-revengeance/user-reviews/811904/platform/ps3/

MGR review.

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#200 bugbag
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Nice review! I still really need to play that game.... I'm really interested now since you said it's challenging.:P