It was not; I was asking if that was all you picked up due to your reply to Woody's statement.ShadowofSonic
no it wasn't i am waiting for a reply
It was not; I was asking if that was all you picked up due to your reply to Woody's statement.ShadowofSonic
no it wasn't i am waiting for a reply
I think he meant organizing your review so you can make it longer without breaking the flow of reading.
Like instead of just doing good or bad, you need to cover the average, and all the additions/ideas.
For example, when I write reviews I normally start with presentation, then overview, story, content, graphics, gameplay, sound design and then the conclusion, some times changing it around to ease the flow of reading. Now doing a good/bad section isn't a bad thing, but personally I don't like using that. I feel like I should explain the different levels of bad and good. RE6's camera wasn't just bad, it was hideous. MGS4's story wasn't just good, it was spectacular.
You have the basic ideas, and with each review I'm seeing a bit more of detail. Just keep at it, try to explain how things work, what isn't good about those things, what is good, and see where the review takes you.
@Sonic Your post did sound a bit rude. I don't know if you intended it to be or not, but we need to respect each other here.
I think he meant organizing your review so you can make it longer without breaking the flow of reading.
Like instead of just doing good or bad, you need to cover the average, and all the additions/ideas.
For example, when I write reviews I normally start with presentation, then overview, story, content, graphics, gameplay, sound design and then the conclusion, some times changing it around to ease the flow of reading. Now doing a good/bad section isn't a bad thing, but personally I don't like using that. I feel like I should explain the different levels of bad and good. RE6's camera wasn't just bad, it was hideous. MGS4's story wasn't just good, it was spectacular.
You have the basic ideas, and with each review I'm seeing a bit more of detail. Just keep at it, try to explain how things work, what isn't good about those things, what is good, and see where the review takes you.
@Sonic Your post did sound a bit rude. I don't know if you intended it to be or not, but we need to respect each other here.
bugbag
yeah i used to do that, but i think the good bad part might be better, but who knows. I have been watching Rev3games reviews, and they do it in that way. Though i started doing it before i even heard of them
Like I say, everyone has their own way of writing.
I think I just like to talk about games. My Dishonored review was way longer than what it turned out to be because I just kept writing.:P
bugbag
Well i learn as i write stuff. My reviews keep getting longer and better compared to my earlier ones
Hey, exactly like bugbag wrote. If you like making a bad/good section. Simply write the review first with the tips we gave you (stated in bugbag's paragraph he wrote) and then make a good/bad section at the very last of the review or at the beginning depending on what you prefer. WoodyBerlin
ok, might do that then
I, for one, prefer simplicity. I'd rather read the one page that says everything in simple terms than the five pages that extrapolate useless information.Kman5507
I'll happily f**k you for using extrapolate. People don't use that word enough.
I, for one, prefer simplicity. I'd rather read the one page that says everything in simple terms than the five pages that extrapolate useless information.Kman5507
I will try to do it better in my Revelations review
http://www.gamespot.com/duke-nukem-3d-atomic-edition/user-reviews/810705/platform/pc/
Got to review Duke 3D, amazing game.
Not bad. The format is better but it could still use an extra paragraph or two to go more into the gameplay. You mention the game has new weapons and doesn't copy/paste from the last game but then you say nothing else about them and what they add to the experience.So here is my new try on a review on a game
Assassin's Creed Revelations
The_Last_Ride
[QUOTE="The_Last_Ride"]Not bad. The format is better but it could still use an extra paragraph or two to go more into the gameplay. You mention the game has new weapons and doesn't copy/paste from the last game but then you say nothing else about them and what they add to the experience.So here is my new try on a review on a game
Assassin's Creed Revelations
Eikichi-Onizuka
ok, i will add it on later when i have time and thought what i can write
Duke Nuken Forever :cry:ShadowofSonicThat's a really, really good... Joke of a game.:P It's crap.
@Naju Very nice review! Even though I dislike Duke Nukem, it was well written.:D
@TLR And I didn't expect such a big jump TLR. That review was pretty good. By the way, if you need any advice feel free to ask! I love discussing writing.:D
I read the last one!:cry:[QUOTE="ShadowofSonic"]If you like discussing writing bug, WHY U NO READ MAI BLOGS?! :cry:bugbag
I just forget sometimes.:P
Even though you see them repeatedly in my sigs? :P
That's a really, really good... Joke of a game.:P It's crap.[QUOTE="ShadowofSonic"]Duke Nuken Forever :cry:bugbag
@Naju Very nice review! Even though I dislike Duke Nukem, it was well written.:D
@TLR And I didn't expect such a big jump TLR. That review was pretty good. By the way, if you need any advice feel free to ask! I love discussing writing.:D
well i think it's my best so far
[QUOTE="bugbag"]That's a really, really good... Joke of a game.:P It's crap.[QUOTE="ShadowofSonic"]Duke Nuken Forever :cry:The_Last_Ride
@Naju Very nice review! Even though I dislike Duke Nukem, it was well written.:D
@TLR And I didn't expect such a big jump TLR. That review was pretty good. By the way, if you need any advice feel free to ask! I love discussing writing.:D
well i think it's my best so far
Duke Nukem Forever is your best game?! :o
[QUOTE="The_Last_Ride"][QUOTE="bugbag"]That's a really, really good... Joke of a game.:P It's crap.[QUOTE="ShadowofSonic"]Duke Nuken Forever :cry:ShadowofSonic
@Naju Very nice review! Even though I dislike Duke Nukem, it was well written.:D
@TLR And I didn't expect such a big jump TLR. That review was pretty good. By the way, if you need any advice feel free to ask! I love discussing writing.:D
well i think it's my best so far
Duke Nukem Forever is your best game?! :o
no my best review
Here is my review
http://us.gamespot.com/battlefield-bad-company-2/user-reviews/811537/platform/xbox360/
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