@loafofgame: thanks a lot for this :) this will be something I focus on in future content.

@MuD3: that's what I'm aiming to bring in future videos. Because this was for Uni it was meant to look fairly professional :P

@loafofgame: we were basically assigned to create a long form video on what we're interested in and show our viewpoint; I like video games so thats why I made this. I'm posting this here because I'm looking for more constructive feedback going forward in this field, rather than an academic assessment :) if that makes sense.

@loafofgame: @notorious1234na@Shmiity thanks for the extra feedback.

I'll explain some stuff that I haven't already. The first 4 minutes or so of the video were shown to my tutor/professor and they pretty much said what I was doing was perfect for the project. And like i said, what I discuss isn't mind-blowing or original, I just needed to show I can openly talk about a topic and present well.

If i pursue this angle of Journalism later, ill try and build upon this with your suggestions :)

@mastermetal777@notorious1234na thanks for the feedback!

I would love you guys to check this out and give me feedback to improve my piece.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1v8oZw8MLXA

Yes I know it's a fairly straightforward discussion and I don't really bring anything new to the table, as it's aimed at my tutors who won't be as aware of what these games are about.

Thanks guys, I'm not trying to promote here, just discuss.