Musically pretty good. I quite like the song.

But performance-wise you just need more practice. It sounds like you're still getting used to playing with each other. It's not all bad, but you definitely need to play with more confidence. A confident sound is the key difference between what makes a band good or bad.

The vocals.... I think the verses actually sound kind of okay. They remind me of lo-fi 90's indie vocals. But the chorus vocals don't sound too hot. The harmony is particularly disastrous. Even ignoring the chorus, the vocals again need more confidence overall. Open your throat, and enunciate your words more.

Overall, there's definitely potential here. The music is quite good. Just keep practicing and you'll pick up that confidence you need.

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[QUOTE="Breakadawn"][QUOTE="DmadFearmonger"]Are you the vocalist?DmadFearmonger

[QUOTE="Breakadawn"]Vocals are the most frustrating thing about music. Well, nevertheless, we're all kids (I'm the oldest member at 15 years old), which pretty much explains the voices. They'll get better, I hope.DmadFearmonger

Jeff Buckley has the voice of God.

That is a fact.

http://soundcloud.com/sawdust-1/sets/ugly-sketches

That link leads to a collection of demos me and my friends have recorded over the past few months. They're really really rough, but regardless, I'd still like to get any kind of feedback on the quality of these songs. If you yourself have any kind of projects like this as well I'll be happy to give you feedback as well.

No, I'm not advertising this for views. All I need are your honest opinions. Since I'm pretty much unknown on these forums, it'd be best if I got opinions from here since there would be no bias whatsoever. Plus this seems like a pretty intelligent community.

Thanks in advance, all.

Joe Dirt.

It has the best quote ever.

"It rubs the lotion on it's skin or else it gets the hose again"

Yo momma is so fat when she sat on a rainbow skittles popped out.

Yo momma is so fat, when she stands on a scale you can see her cellphone number