The first post says that all the chapters are coming soon. What is your definition of soon?waZelda
Soon enough. :P
If things go smoothly (and by smoothly I mean, the opposite of how the Prelude went), then this episode should be done by the end of the year.
[quote="ILF"]despite still being youngeraliblabla2007
"Still" messes up the sentence in my opinion. I'd get rid of it
Fo sho you rite!
Isonno Rennekie.ILF
Weaabo.
Gezundeit.
Sixth and Seventh Skies without homesILF
Or, you could just say "homeless". ;)
Thinking about it...
Isonno than with the lackadaisical LloydeILF
Well, I suppose seeing this random long word pop up was less shocking than when Sandy used it. :P
I'm surprised we haven't reached any real issues at this point. :P
which so many had leaned on--and shoulders--which so many had cried onILF
I wouldn't want to be that guy. Can you imagine drying your shirt from tears all the damn time?
He clearly derives some sort of sick, twisted, erogenous pleasure from it all.
   Lan stopped and looked at her.ILF
I'd say "turned to her" would fit better, though it's not a big deal.
Ye hath not foundth a single flaw thus far!
The man's skin ruptured and blood poured out like a faucet, but he kept his grip on Claudia, determined to choke her to the death. Lloyde grabbed his shoulders--fighting his own flinches at the thought of touching someone he'd just killed--and desperately tried to pry him off of her, but Lan kept his grip on the girl until every ounce of his own life had dwindled awayILF
Seeing as, for us fragile humans, cutting someone's throat = instant death (which this man does not demonstrate), I hereby interpret Lan Rennekie alongside his son Isonno as an being from a species of extraterrestial origin. Now I see the science fiction element! :D
That interpretation was hilarious except for the part where it made sense.
he went on barrel roll all the way to the bottom ILF
Oh, good, that's how humans in here do things, too. ;)
Did you know Michael Jackson just died doing one of those? Or so I heard.
BlankeILF
From what I've read so far, it's a fitting name. ;)
Almost as good as Oeppe, innit? :D
That is, if you mean "blank-headed".
:D...
Anyway, it looks like I've slayed another editing demon! :) I'm clearly what my tag suggests!!
Impressions on the story?
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