@forgotten10x:

Youre right, it proves nothing. A shitty rap full of misspellings is what REALLY proves a dang thing. That's why your college professors asked you to demonstrate your rapping prowess, right?

@forgotten10x:

Youre right, it proves nothing. A shitty rap full of misspellings is what REALLY proves a dang thing. That's why your college professors asked you to demonstrate your rapping prowess, right?

@forgotten10x:

WTF are you on about? This discussion has honestly gotten a bit pathetic, but I've got a degree too.

Again, it's not that impressive.

@forgotten10x:

Why don't you instead just show us a few sentences of properly capitalized, punctuated, and spelled English?

PS- An American adult having a college degree really isn't as impressive as you seem to think it is.

@forgotten10x:

Why don't you instead just show us a few sentences of properly capitalized, punctuated, and spelled English?

PS- An American adult having a college degree really isn't as impressive as you seem to think it is.

@forgotten10x:

If you want to have a little poetry contest, ok. I don't think I've done such a thing since elementary school, but what the hell. . . Let's let everyone vote on the best poem!

I once met a guy named forgotten.

His syntax was nothing but rotten.

He tried to look smart

but his thread, from the start,

proved to be plain misbegotten.

Anyway, I proposed an academic paper because that would be a better indicator of ones education than a poem.

So many English errors above but I'll bite. Me first. Line breaks are as intended.

Foglife

Look

The differences are minimal

I don't anger like you

I had my time in the shade

Let me out for a little while

Most times I'm just pleased to stare

Not that often the chance arises

Forget what I said before

I can't remember it anyway

I guess the thing that keeps me going is curiosity

What can I make or this or that?

Some say tomorrow never comes

I think it's just today only a little later

The hope people express is sickening

That conceded notion that life will become worthy of our attention

Has it ever?

Where am I in all this?

We all lay beneath heathen layers of filth

Hidden by our vile notions of sex and bleeding thoughts like words

Not even the remembrances of which we were disturb us now

A Letter From Before

Do I appear closer

now? These words

were once visited

by my consciousness,

but now they stand

empty, until you

momentarily fill

their shell with

your presence.

Belive in me.

Trust me.

So many English errors above but I'll bite. Me first. Line breaks are as intended.

Foglife

Look

The differences are minimal

I don't anger like you

I had my time in the shade

Let me out for a little while

Most times I'm just pleased to stare

Not that often the chance arises

Forget what I said before

I can't remember it anyway

I guess the thing that keeps me going is curiosity

What can I make or this or that?

Some say tomorrow never comes

I think it's just today only a little later

The hope people express is sickening

That conceded notion that life will become worthy of our attention

Has it ever?

Where am I in all this?

We all lay beneath heathen layers of filth

Hidden by our vile notions of sex and bleeding thoughts like words

Not even the remembrances of which we were disturb us now

A Letter From Before

Do I appear closer

now? These words

were once visited

by my consciousness,

but now they stand

empty, until you

momentarily fill

their shell with

your presence.

Belive in me.

Trust me.

@forgotten10x:

"I really don't care."

If you don't care that you portray yourself as an uneducated imbecile, don't be surprised when people respond to you like you're an uneducated imbecile. Don't come here demanding that others respect you if you can't be bothered to respect yourself.

"Okay I challenge you to a poem contest since you can write so much better then me"

"I." What you mean is "better than I."

Better than a poem, how about an academic paper. Poetry is great, but let's look at something that is actually a properly sourced and well-structured piece of actual English.

So many English errors above but I'll bite. Me first. Line breaks are as intended.

Foglife

Look

The differences are minimal

I don't anger like you

I had my time in the shade

Let me out for a little while

Most times I'm just pleased to stare

Not that often the chance arises

Forget what I said before

I can't remember it anyway

I guess the thing that keeps me going is curiosity

What can I make or this or that?

Some say tomorrow never comes

I think it's just today only a little later

The hope people express is sickening

That conceded notion that life will become worthy of our attention

Has it ever?

Where am I in all this?

We all lay beneath heathen layers of filth

Hidden by our vile notions of sex and bleeding thoughts like words

Not even the remembrances of which we were disturb us now

A Letter From Before

Do I appear closer

now? These words

were once visited

by my consciousness,

but now they stand

empty, until you

momentarily fill

their shell with

your presence.

Belive in me.

Trust me.