Hey guys, im trying to make it big in the music industry, i'll show you a piece i created recently. it took me 6 months to compose it completely. Creative constructive critisiscm would be appreciated thanks.
stepping out the caves of Lydia with animal skins and hair on our bodies we set out to find what he has been hiding what is this i see? Darwin's dreams are breaking apart as we shift to misguided beliefs is worth the wait? or shall we fly over the next hill?
Chorus
thus is hard to believe that we got this far yet we are taking it for granted What can Darwin say? This is not natural selection, this is artificial section as sew ourselves into a catalyzed bomb build up that might blow in the next second
verse 2
we can't wait for the unfolding of miracles of the dark ages with a small step, we sailed to the stars. leaving our souls behind as we explore the unexplored. eventually we questioned and doubted as Armageddon from the other side of our reflection come raining down on us
bridge
if logic cant be used we turned to quantum its not fair to see that we didnt look through the "looking glass of Alice" as we traveled through the light of years we should ask ourselves a question before the great departure awaits!
*yeah, not that great but i want to give a star trek vibe in the end because i want to set serious vibe on the entire songs*
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