This is a short story I finished recently and I wanted to know what everyone here thinks. Again, it is horror and is pretty violent so if you can't handle it don't read it.
Wow, I don't even know what to say. Top scores all around. The story just gripped me and held me till I was done reading. Now I need to go take a shower (take it as a compliment).
PS: I'd still love some more space between paragraphs though, just saying.Â
Wow, I don't even know what to say. Top scores all around. The story just gripped me and held me till I was done reading. Now I need to go take a shower (take it as a compliment).
PS: I'd still love some more space between paragraphs though, just saying.
waZelda
Wow thanks for the compliment. i love how you need to take a shower after reading it. :P Also the reason I don't include paragraph spaceing is because I like to challenge myself to put as much detail onto a page as possible. I feel like I'm cheating if I put too much space between paragraphs because it artificially lengthens the space a story takes up. It's this weird little quirk I have, sorry.
You don't need to add spaces between paragraphs, but you really do need to add indents. You can do it on google docs pretty easily. Just select all and add an indent or two to your taste so that it's a bit more easy to read.
You don't need to add spaces between paragraphs, but you really do need to add indents. You can do it on google docs pretty easily. Just select all and add an indent or two to your taste so that it's a bit more easy to read.
You don't need to add spaces between paragraphs, but you really do need to add indents. You can do it on google docs pretty easily. Just select all and add an indent or two to your taste so that it's a bit more easy to read.
Foolz3h
Actually spaces between paras makes it an easier read rather than only indents.Â
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