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#1 Posted by zinedinezidane1 (3110 posts) -

Casey my nephew, was a premature baby, so he had a hard time actually making it into this world. My family have sacrificed alot for him but it has all been worth it. Casey went into the hospital only a day or so after my birthday of November 2nd and did not get out until around the end of January. Casey became very sick with a couple diffrent virus's. The doctors did not believe he could make it and around the middle of November, most of my family did not have such high hopes but he surpassed our expectations and the docters very far. I wrote this poem for him because i wanted to write a poem and i needed somthing for my writing **** When i gave it to my teacher she asked me right away if i had copied it from some source but i said "no". She could not believe it and my family were also very impressed, so i tryed putting it in a poetry contest online. Which i did not win (although they said i was a finalist) but i got it in mine own book with tons of other poets. Its actually on the first page of the book.

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The Invincible Casey

Hanging on by a thread

Just to see the world ahead making progress but still no sound

Casey slumbers yet fights with courage

So don’t give up Casey, don’t give up

He was born real small but fought through it all

A nephew, a son, a grandchild, a great-grandchild

Small he may be, yet Casey is filled with a lot of heart

A scream, a laugh, a smile

Casey is full of joyful eyes, all-the-while

A night may come,

When he becomes sick again

But Casey fights it through the end

A day may come

When he’s hurt or scared

But we’re there for him until he feels better again

Somewhere somehow

There are angels watching over him

Who guard his soul

Who breathe life back into him

Who make him better again

With the slightest sign he fills us with hope

Until we see his smile

We shall forever wait,

For the angels final call,

And send him back home

To see his merry smile

To love his laughter

All the while

We long for Casey’s enthusiastic presence

As we celebrate Christmas spirit.

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What do you guys think?

http://www.poetry.com/

luckypool04
very good poem
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#2 Posted by zinedinezidane1 (3110 posts) -
Howdy ya'll, Are you bored? Got nothing to do. Well I will be updating this topic whenever something else can be done for the union.

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i will try me best
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#3 Posted by zinedinezidane1 (3110 posts) -
what is your favorite anime
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#4 Posted by zinedinezidane1 (3110 posts) -
I'll keep posting here, don't worry.Lance_C
me too and i think if you put a tag and sig request thread will get more people to join
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#5 Posted by zinedinezidane1 (3110 posts) -
hello my name is sherif i will try to mkae this union more active
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#9 Posted by zinedinezidane1 (3110 posts) -
New Super Mario Bros
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#10 Posted by zinedinezidane1 (3110 posts) -
hello my name is sherif im 13 years old from egypt
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