The reason i voted yours out was because it could have been executed a lot better, I can see you tried to make depth but the blur is to strong. I dont't really get the concept of it either, In a tournament, you shouldnt try something new because if its your first time trying it most likely won't be any better then what your used to.
KH will forever be my #1 game, love it so much. Love the depth you got going on but you need more then lighting to fill your atmo with. it looks plain, all i see are c4ds. Add more variety. Your improving though, kiu.