What I intended by the line "Fear his thoughts...", was literally, fear his thoughts. It was intentional, and it messed up... Basically I wanted to bring out the power of Darkmoon, and add emphasis to it. Darkmoon is a character I made up in one of my poems last year, since then I repeatedly used him whenever I wanted to create an atmosphere of suspense or desperation. Whenever you see him in one of my stories or poems, it usually means that story/poem isn't a very positive and uplifting one. Basically I wrote this poem to introduce him.
Thanks for the comments, I'll try to improve on future works. ^_^