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#1 Uziel126
Member since 2006 • 2994 Posts

What I intended by the line "Fear his thoughts...", was literally, fear his thoughts. It was intentional, and it messed up... Basically I wanted to bring out the power of Darkmoon, and add emphasis to it. Darkmoon is a character I made up in one of my poems last year, since then I repeatedly used him whenever I wanted to create an atmosphere of suspense or desperation. Whenever you see him in one of my stories or poems, it usually means that story/poem isn't a very positive and uplifting one. Basically I wrote this poem to introduce him.

Thanks for the comments, I'll try to improve on future works. ^_^

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#2 Uziel126
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Darkmoon rests on his iron throne
Face hidden by a mask of stone
Lord of  Despair, and King of Night
Haunts the Sandman's darkest dream.

Freezing touch and burning gaze
Fear his thoughts that consume you whole
Darkmoon covets death and sorrow
Destruction is his hallowed ground

His god is War, his steed, the Night
The Clock struck twelve- Prepare the Light!
The Light reveals her star-struck sight
Darkmoon cowers before her might

'Til only dust and ash remain
The Dark One's power broken and shamed
But lo! Even as Darkmoon falls,
His venomed fang struck out once more

The Light, corrupted, soon decays
To fall from her lofty keep to Earth
And as she tries to rise once more
Darkmoon overcomes her and-
She
is
no
more.

 

A poem I wrote a while back...

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#3 Uziel126
Member since 2006 • 2994 Posts
Hi all. I go by Uziel126 on the 'Net, call me Uziel if that's easier. I hope to be contributing to this union, though I can't promise much, as I don't especially like Gamespot. Still, the main reason I joined was to get some comments on my works (mostly poems, but I'm working on a short story as well).
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