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I'm making a (hopfully good) story!

Recently I have been making a story (well, two actually but the second one I am putting a heckof a lot of effort into it.  I've allready redone the first chapter twice!).  This story is a Zelda/Metroid mix where Samus enters a vortex/wormhole thing and ends up in Hyrule.  Here is the prologue and first chapter.  I find it quite good (especially when Samus gets lost in the lost woods, you heard me!).  I must warn you that it will take a while for other chapters to come up as I pt a lot of effort into my work.  Enjoy!

Prologue

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Report No. 01659. Subject-Black Hole?…

Approx. 2 months ago Galactic Federation squad Pioneer located a Black hole in the Alpha Galaxy 3 Light years from the nearest Federation Command centre. The subject Black hole is in fact not a black hole and in retrospect is in fact a portal to an unknown universe, an alternate system never before seen. All attempted probes have shorted out due to unknown reasons. Plausible suggestions include used up fuel while travelling through the vortex-like environment within the portal. However many attempts made all of them fail and the only remaining solution was to send a live subject into the portal. Before any rights could be made to send someone inside Space Pirates discovered this portal and overpowered the squadron. Now no remaining signals are being sent and we ask you to travel to this portal and terminate any Space Pirates in the area. Be careful….

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Chapter I-The Unknown Portal

Samus’s Gunship

This has to be the first time I have ever been sent to take up such a mission.

I thought. What would the pirates want with this “Portal”….More power I assume. I prepared myself as I reached my location. Why do they still refer to it as light years? It takes me three hours!

The area was abandoned. “So much for finding Space Pirates” I actually said out loud…Though I was talking to my computer, Adam.

“No traces of Pirate activity” Adam replied “I believe they went inside the Portal”.

“Do you think?” I said. “Yes I do, I think the only way of finding them is to enter the portal, any objections lady?”

I laughed at his comment. He always did that, back in the days when he was my CO he would always end objective with his trademark line. Then came the Space Pirate raid. Adam was killed trying to save my life…After that incident I left the Federation Corp and became a bounty hunter. The Federation eventually caught up with me and assigned me to a mission on Zebes…my past home. I was given mission after mission until they sent me to the BSL research station during the X incident, and Adam was my computer. His mind and memory transplanted to a computer chip, he was obviously to valuable to lose. However I was infected beforehand with the X and was given an antidote to cure me, this antidote consisted of Metroid DNA from the last remaining Metroid. Since then I have been able to absorb the X to recover my abilities. However my image was changed. My physical appearance didn’t change at all but my Power Suit changed completely. Now it is a fleshier, more streamlined version. After that I swore to destroy the X once and for all and inevitably ended up destroying the BSL lab and the X’s home world, SR 388. For destroying the BSL I was put up to many court cases, luckily I was seen as not guilty as my reasons where valid. Now here I am, with my new suit, completely new DNA structure and Adam.

“I guess I have no choice” I responded to Adams remark “Away we go”….

Hyrule Field

A young man on a horse was hurtling towards the desert where recent news told of a meteor, or some other object, crashing in its centre. This man was garbed in a green tunic with an equally green cap, he had dirty blond hair, blue eyes and long, pointy ears. He had a sword and shield strapped onto his back. The horses pace increased as it charged though the field until it came to a stop at a gate guarded by two well tanned, armoured women with inanely deep orange hair.

“Who goes there?” The first guard asked. She spoke unflinchingly with a strong willed valour. “And what business do you seek?” asked the second guard with equal valour.

“I seek the impact site by orders of her majesty, Princess Zelda”…

A Mysterious Forest

“Damn, that didn’t go according to plan” I burst out. I had misguided my ship as I entered the new atmosphere of this parallel world. My ship was now running on auxiliary power as the ship entered its self-automated reconstruct mode. “You always seem to crash your ship one way or another Samus” Adam motioned. “What was that?!” I angrily shouted out. “Err…nothing Samus…nothing at all” He nervously replied.

I decided that I should investigate the area and return to Adam with any discoveries. I looked at the four choices that where available to choose from, each a dark path of which its location could not be seen. I made my decision. As I travelled through I saw, to my surprise, my ship. But wasn’t that behind me? I turned back to find nothing but three new paths. I checked how far I was from ship on my map. 1.7 kilometres?! I’ve only made around 20 steps, how in hells name can I be one point **** seven kilometres from my ship!!!…I stopped. There was a light, cheery music in the air. It was calming, yet it was happy. I decided to follow the music to find out where it was coming from. To my surprise it didn’t tae me long to find the source. It was in a meadow with a small, easily navigated maze. At the end of the maze I saw a young girl in bright green clothing and equally green hair on a tree stump playing a clay instrument. The music lifted my senses out of anger and into a sense of bliss…the music stopped. I looked towards the girl. She was staring at me.

Awright vol.2

Yea....I  now I should have used a moreoriginal title but its darn late here in Britain.  Anyway, onto the news.  I have a DS Lite at last.....well, not until my Birthday.....blast.  In other news I got a new book.

So far so good reading wise.

Anyway, thats all for now.  Until next time.

Komodo_Zero

Awright!!!

Two things.  I am now level 10 whch means I can upload videos ( :lol: ) and secondly I am now an Officer at the Metroid Prime Union ( :D ).  Thanks Link_486!

Now to upload a vid.....

Good news and Bad news.

The good news

Like, totally.
Chances are you know individuals who are popular, and if you don't, chances are you wish you did. You wish you could be just like them, don't you? They're the ones who always score the touchdown. They're the ones who always get the girl. Or the boy, as the case may be. Those people and their winning smiles with their bright, white teeth and their clever jokes and their laughing and their personalities and their charm! What makes them so special, huh? What do they have that I don't have, why don't you tell me?!

I'm popular now....<3

The bad news......school, tomorrow.yea.......at least I'm popular now.

Owie...

I have been stung not once but FIVE times by a wasp.  I think I hit a nest....but then I wouldn't be able to speak right now.....Anyways.  New news, my internet ****ed up again, I have no clue what happened cos everything seemed fine....must have been a problem on the other end....maybe, just maybe.  Now, time for me to tend to the sting on my back , on my arm, the two on my right shoulder and the one on the back of my head.

New union (again!)

Right I'm starting afresh.  No more places for Officers, all other places availible yadda yadda yadda.  Just read my previous blogs for info.

What taking so long?

It has been 6 days since I decided to make a union, 4 days since 4 charters where chosen, only 2 have accepted.  The other two either havn't noticed or havn't seen the invitation yet.  If you two are reading this, accept the invitation so I can get the union started.  It will be a geat help. 

Quick Update.  It is likely that the last member will not accept seeing that he has not been on GS for a while now.  If he does not accept soon I Will Replace Him!

New Union, do you want to join?

The Union I was making was getting hard to handle with all the members having the max number of unions asociated with or are already a charter member for another union. So I'm starting from scratch.
The Union is still called WiiConnectDS (a Wii and DS union), all members who want to join must state wether they have max number of unions asociated with or wether they are already a charter member for another union.
N.B. Officer and Charter places are unavailable.  Mod and Recruit places ar the only places left.

I'm making a new Union

As the title sugests I am making a union. It is gong to be about the Nintendo Wii and DS. If anybody wants to be a charter member just ask. The Union shall be called WiiConnectDS
That is all for now.

Komodo_Zero

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