Well, Stanlie is pretty much a bad guy and an asshole, so I stick by my observation that many wives = ungood character.Â
Barbariser
Holy crap this is true. Stanlie had two wives, Pyenze had three, Dragon had four.
Oh dear.
Well, if Van was Godden's host then I can assume that somehow Godden jumped from Van to Dr. Dragon when he was skewered by the Zircon? (Also assuming that Dr Dragon was the one doing the skewering). You probably can't reveal this, but I'm also guessing that Lad attacking Pyenze against orders had something to do with Pyenze being in league with the dude who killed his father?
Barbariser
Yeah I can't reveal that (you're close), but on the other thing, I will just mention that Dragon had golden eyes before Van attacked him in the memory.
Strange, isn't it? Van has purple hair from being possessed, Dragon has golden eyes. Noa's only feature was the hair-color change, but when she reverted briefly (ch.13) she got golden eyes. :roll:
I'm counting on you to figure out this mystery, Barb.
Another thing I realized that has to be true for this backstory to work, btw: either Lad Wydnie didn't inherit any memories from Van about what the real Van looked like, or Lad Wydnie doesn't know what he himself looks like. :P
Barbariser
The former. I should've mentioned that in ch.45 or 47.
But what's her motive for giving Van to Niccoli? I figured that her relationship with Nic was just there so she could get close to him and manipulate him into using Van to fight Dragon. Alternatively, she genuinely adored/loved Nic and gave Van to him as a "gift" and to help his plan, but this makes her seem rather blonde and lacking in personal agency.
Barbariser
It's the blonde thing.
Here's how that conversation would've went.
Niccoli: So I hear that kid of yours is back from the dead. [Insert plans to betray Dragon here.] Want.
Anikae: No! I've already sacrificed too much to get him back.
Niccoli: You want to talk about sacrifice? I just erased the memories of all my former allies. You're not his mother, Anikae. Look, either I use him or Dragon will. Remember who's the good guy here.
Anikae: Oh Niccoli, you. Okay, I'll send him a text or two.
Oh, well that makes more sense and is less cheaty, although I guess it means that the original Liberation Front is dead for good after this point. Do these characters have any relation to the ones in Volume I: Element? (I had to look back a page to remember what it was called).
Barbariser
MWAHAHA wouldn't you like to know!?
I suppose that Lad's body will now have Godden's personality (after all, it is an unconventional rebirth), and both Van and Lad will be effectively gone as characters?Â
Barbariser
Lad's body disintegrated into thin air during shadowhax... If you're referring to the new red-haired man on the ship, there's another bucket of intrigue and wonder for you.
Rail / Elira, Ex / Arcouda, Delta Dick - No opinion, they don't show much of themselves in their dialogue. Seem more distant, chilly than the next three squaddies. Ghost / Enkiden - Comes across as being on the friendly boisterous side, deserves it because he seems to be tougher and more energetic than almost all the other squaddies.Â
Lair / Ariel - I can best describe her as being a bit girlier than a female version of Ghost.
Ziare / Zion - Inherently more stressful and complicated role than the rest, so it's no wonder that he makes more mistakes than they do. Doesn't excuse his initial displays of cowardice which he thankfully grows out of. Has a good heart and understands the meaning of determination though.
Elf / Rayshael - Easily the most formal, coldest squaddie. If not for the Winter Queen I'd consider Elf to be the story's ice queen.Â
Noa - One of the scariest characters in the story, and definitely fvcked up. She would be even more dangerous if she was more, uh, rational. I'm not sure what her primary objective is after excising the parasite, but I'd guess that she wanted to get at Dr. Dragon. Sociopathically beating up her only available friends and allies is not an efficient means of getting at that goal.Â
Van / Lad - He's a bit like Noa in that he's a bit single-minded and a sociopathic dick, but displays far more flexibility and is definitely more reasonable for the purposes of actually achieving it.
Barbariser
*checks off a whole list of stuff*
And did your opinion on Van change after learning he was Lad?
At that length, one saga is going to be longer than a Game of Thrones book and the both series' will probably be comparable in total word count. I hope that's where the similarities end though.
Barbariser
I don't know what the wordcount is for GoT but I will say Metal Shadow will probably be as long as the Wheel of Time if I wrote out all those sagas. The pacing, however = I don't like fillers, so even sans those side-sagas, the series will cover as much ground, if not more, as TWoT, though in far fewer books.
You planning to make a living on this universe? Writing an entire series in addition to its expanded universe is a very hefty task and might take decades to actually accomplish.Â
Barbariser
Lol did my English teacher put you up to that? Tell her I've changed my opinion on that.
One of things I learned this summer by upping the release schedule for the Prelude is that you don't need a whole year to write a book. So I'm confident I can crank out the finale for the main canon well before I hit my thirties. It will take several years, though, which is partly why I will release it on Jukepop: so I can make a bit of money while doing it.
And although making a living would be nice, the endgame is to make a living off of Metal Shadow the Game, not Metal Shadow the Serial, so I'm willing to make some sacrifices for the Serial if it comes to non-payment.
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