It's Prez again.
I'm gaining the feeling (both through direct comment and observation) that some of the things I'm writing might be a little over the top in my critiques, especially poetry. So, I though I'd give a few helpful pointers for critiquing.
1. On grammar: everyone knows how to do this one fairly well. Clearly the intelligence level I'm seeing is one-up, and people are pretty spot on with their grammar editing (I even got busted already. :P ) That being said, there's more to it than grammar. It's only one part of the show, so to speak. Here's a few more.
2. Allegory, Metaphors and Analogies: These are critical elements that separate weak pieces from awesome pieces, but I'm not sure everyone is familiar with them or even knows what they are. (Example: I noted "A Familiar Tune," as an allegorical piece, and I keep getting criticism that it's "not original." Allegory is another word for being symbolic in a way. An homage is giving tribute to. I was giving a tribute to something, and even titled it as such. "A Familiar Tune," = not original. :) I think if I would've made that more clear, we'd be less redundant in calling it "not original." :P
Anyway, allegory, metaphors and analogies: study them up. Look for them. Does a written piece have any? Once you are familiar with these things, stories read almost as though it's through completely different eyes. Think of this: it's like spicing up food. Without them, they can still taste good. With them, they're even better. Used wrong or too much, it tastes bad.
3. Get familiar with form. Poetry has over a hundred different forms, for example. Look for connections to forms, and whether a piece can be aided, "spiced up," with form. In writing, juxtaposing is great for sci-fi and fantasy (which seems to be very popular here). (Juxtaposing = placing two separate entities in n with each other to highlight their differences.) Many might think "But I see that already." Merely saying "This guy is good, this guy is bad" isn't enough though. Look for subtleties to highlight the differences. If you're the writer, ADD subtleties. The good guy has a little idiosyncrasy (some small, character trait) that separates him from "ordinary folk." But don't just write it, blend it in. Camouflage it a bit.
Maybe this will help with the redundant posts of "Not original," "very nice," "deep," "good stuff." Writing's like being a chef or wine taster. Anyone can say "this tastes good." But an experienced fellow can say "Nice, I can taste the hint of lemon juice you added to make it your own." Hope that helps.
Prez
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