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#1 HybridKing
Member since 2012 • 8322 Posts

V1-

V2-

V3-

Restarted Version-

Saw a tut on how to do this and decided to try it out.

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#2 anihimz
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Woaaaa this is really interesting My only complaint is that the eyes don't look natural, idk how to explain it but they don't look right Also I'd change the color of the text because I can barely read "Robot" Other than that I like it, good job
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#3 BrunoBRS
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the two main issuses are the lines and perspective.

the lines need some depth to them, or else it just looks like painting. some of the lines (namely the one on the back) are really oddly shaped too. try to make them in one stroke instead of connecting a bunch of dots.

the perspective is simple. you just need to adjust those circles to match her skin. the one in the arm is fine, but the ones in the back need to be angled better.

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#4 HybridKing
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Odd how?
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#5 Bobakuzero
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Ive seen this topic title so many times. and yet no anime android sig. but rather an original LP. good job. agree with bruno, but great concept and work my friend.
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The lines have a jagged side, did you use pentool? Remember connect two points and then make a point in the middle. Press ctrl and move the point around to get a perfect curve.
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#7 HybridKing
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The lines have a jagged side, did you use pentool? Remember connect two points and then make a point in the middle. Press ctrl and move the point around to get a perfect curve. shadowchronicle
Yeah, first time I used it, guess it shows :P And I free formed it for the most part.

@Boba-I'm guessing you've seen alot of anime android girls? :P Thanks.

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Odd how?HybridKing
odd as in poorly traced. you can try shadow's trick to see if you can make it smoother.
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#9 HybridKing
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V2 is up.
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#10 BrunoBRS
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much better, though i still think the bottom two circles need to match like the top one.

also, you could try using the clone tool to erase that tattoo from her back.

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#11 dahui58
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v2 looks great but I think the orange segments on her arm/back look unnatural and flatten it a bit
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#12 HybridKing
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V3 (As in, the last time I'll work on this cause I've been messing with it for the better part of 3 days) is up.