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#151 Badosh
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Holy sh*t, I wrote 20,000 words in 9 and a half hours last night o_Ocharizard1605
For what?
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#152 Sagem28
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Holy sh*t, I wrote 20,000 words in 9 and a half hours last night o_Ocharizard1605

that's perseverance, right there

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Holy sh*t, I wrote 20,000 words in 9 and a half hours last night o_Ocharizard1605
:o amazing!
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[QUOTE="Badosh"] For what?

My novel. Since I am also turning it in for class on Monday, I need to fast track it, and not procrastinate like I usually do. But that, that was crazy. Like my head is still buzzing.

that's perseverance, right there

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Right? Oh man, I cannot believe I actually did that.
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[QUOTE="charizard1605"]Holy sh*t, I wrote 20,000 words in 9 and a half hours last night o_OBadosh
For what?

for someone else to give a fck im gonna pass on this guys
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[QUOTE="mems_1224"]FTL is pretty damn amazing blue_hazy_basic
saw u playing it on steam, must get it on the xmas sale

It was $6 on GOG and that was cheap enough for me :P Im gonna be pissed when its like $3 in 3 weeks :lol:
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*funny gifs*

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[QUOTE="charizard1605"] My novel. Since I am also turning it in for class on Monday, I need to fast track it, and not procrastinate like I usually do. But that, that was crazy. Like my head is still buzzing.

Wow that's crazy. I don't think I could do that. I like to stretch out my writing, but even if I had to finish it up quick like that, I would probably just give up hah.
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#161 MaskedPlayer
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Theres a new one of this?

Eitherway I always warm up with some nice chocolate :)

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*farts in lounge*
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[QUOTE="Badosh"][QUOTE="charizard1605"] My novel. Since I am also turning it in for class on Monday, I need to fast track it, and not procrastinate like I usually do. But that, that was crazy. Like my head is still buzzing.

Wow that's crazy. I don't think I could do that. I like to stretch out my writing, but even if I had to finish it up quick like that, I would probably just give up hah.

I honestly didn't think I could do it either. Like don't get me wrong, I write really fast, but I'm still low overall, because of how hard it is for me to keep my attention on the story or the book. This time though, I like neutered my computer by removing its internet, and went all in. I think it came out well, though I'm rewriting the last chapter right now to fix it.
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I honestly didn't think I could do it either. Like don't get me wrong, I write really fast, but I'm still low overall, because of how hard it is for me to keep my attention on the story or the book. This time though, I like neutered my computer by removing its internet, and went all in. I think it came out well, though I'm rewriting the last chapter right now to fix it.charizard1605
I totally know what you mean, I distracted far too often. How many words total is the novel?

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[QUOTE="charizard1605"] I honestly didn't think I could do it either. Like don't get me wrong, I write really fast, but I'm still low overall, because of how hard it is for me to keep my attention on the story or the book. This time though, I like neutered my computer by removing its internet, and went all in. I think it came out well, though I'm rewriting the last chapter right now to fix it.Badosh

I totally know what you mean, I distracted far too often. How many words total is the novel?

Right now, I am at 48,901. The target is a 60,000-90,000 range. I'm thinking that I turn in a 60,000 word for class, and then go back, rework it, add another 20,000 words, and then start sending it out.
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#167 Badosh
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[QUOTE="charizard1605"] Right now, I am at 48,901. The target is a 60,000-90,000 range. I'm thinking that I turn in a 60,000 word for class, and then go back, rework it, add another 20,000 words, and then start sending it out.

I'm assuming this is still a first draft? Or, have you had any workshops with the story yet?
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[QUOTE="Badosh"][QUOTE="charizard1605"] Right now, I am at 48,901. The target is a 60,000-90,000 range. I'm thinking that I turn in a 60,000 word for class, and then go back, rework it, add another 20,000 words, and then start sending it out.

I'm assuming this is still a first draft? Or, have you had any workshops with the story yet?

First draft, but individual chapters have had a fair amount of workshopping. Once I turn in the rough final draft for class, I am planning on entering perhaps the most extensive period of editing I have ever done for any of my stories yet. It's going to be brutal.
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#169 Badosh
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[QUOTE="charizard1605"] First draft, but individual chapters have had a fair amount of workshopping. Once I turn in the rough final draft for class, I am planning on entering perhaps the most extensive period of editing I have ever done for any of my stories yet. It's going to be brutal.

Yeah figured as much. Yeah, I have one "book" done, but I'm actually trying to avoid editing/revising it as much as possible right now because it's almost 150,000 words (I know, I know :P) Does the class get to read your completed work, or just the prof?
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[QUOTE="Badosh"][QUOTE="charizard1605"] First draft, but individual chapters have had a fair amount of workshopping. Once I turn in the rough final draft for class, I am planning on entering perhaps the most extensive period of editing I have ever done for any of my stories yet. It's going to be brutal.

Yeah figured as much. Yeah, I have one "book" done, but I'm actually trying to avoid editing/revising it as much as possible right now because it's almost 150,000 words (I know, I know :P) Does the class get to read your completed work, or just the prof?

Haha, 150,000 words? I can't ever stretch out my stories enough to make them that long, I fizzle out at about 90,000. What genre is it? Fantasy? And yeah, editing that is gonna be a b*tch :P Just the Professor, technically; but some of my class wants me to email it to them as well, so I'm gonna do it. More feedback for when I sit down to edit it lol.
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#171 Badosh
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[QUOTE="charizard1605"] Haha, 150,000 words? I can't ever stretch out my stories enough to make them that long, I fizzle out at about 90,000. What genre is it? Fantasy? And yeah, editing that is gonna be a b*tch :P Just the Professor, technically; but some of my class wants me to email it to them as well, so I'm gonna do it. More feedback for when I sit down to edit it lol.

:P Yeah, it's Fantasy, but it's such a mixture, it's hard to say actually. I'm working on the sequel now, and I'm at around 80,000 words for that one, so after I finish both I'll start editing. Gives me more time to mentally prepare. Yeah no doubt. I honestly wish i could do a novel, but my "capstone" for next semester is limited to a a collection of short stories, poetry or a screenplay. Don't ask me why... I hope the other students in your class give good feedback, I swear some people just are terrible at it, even if their fantastic writers themselves.
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[QUOTE="Badosh"][QUOTE="charizard1605"] Haha, 150,000 words? I can't ever stretch out my stories enough to make them that long, I fizzle out at about 90,000. What genre is it? Fantasy? And yeah, editing that is gonna be a b*tch :P Just the Professor, technically; but some of my class wants me to email it to them as well, so I'm gonna do it. More feedback for when I sit down to edit it lol.

:P Yeah, it's Fantasy, but it's such a mixture, it's hard to say actually. I'm working on the sequel now, and I'm at around 80,000 words for that one, so after I finish both I'll start editing. Gives me more time to mentally prepare. Yeah no doubt. I honestly wish i could do a novel, but my "capstone" for next semester is limited to a a collection of short stories, poetry or a screenplay. Don't ask me why... I hope the other students in your class give good feedback, I swear some people just are terrible at it, even if their fantastic writers themselves.

Nice. Think of it this way, if you do the sequel now, then work on finalizing the first one, then, assuming it gets published, your readers won't have to wait too long for the sequel :P I actually found that writing short stories and poetry all semester helped me with being able to do the novel: I just broke the novel down into similar episodic portions, almost self contained, you might say, and always focused on doing those, and never the 'big picture' 60k words/200 pages thing, which can get very daunting. So hey, it might help. Plus hey, creative break and all that jazz lol And yeah, I agree :P The problem is, people are too nice. Like, I understand not wanting to be jerks or anything, but come on, if you find something wrong with the story, just tell me so I can fix it, I won't hate you for it, on the contrary, I'll love you for it...
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*farts in lounge*Gamingmoney
Thats not very mature. Who are you anyway?
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#174 Badosh
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[QUOTE="charizard1605"] And yeah, I agree :P The problem is, people are too nice. Like, I understand not wanting to be jerks or anything, but come on, if you find something wrong with the story, just tell me so I can fix it, I won't hate you for it, on the contrary, I'll love you for it...

Oh yeah, don't get me wrong, I love poetry, but it's just annoying we can't do whatever we want. I guess that's what bothers me. And yeah, I totally agree. Now imagine if you went to school in Minnesota like I do, where people are already too nice about everything. :P
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#175 freedomfreak
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Sean just said the nicest thing to me. I might just start crying.
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#176 Badosh
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[QUOTE="freedomfreak"]Sean just said the nicest thing to me. I might just start crying.

Start crying bro. My shoulder is here for you.
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#177 MaskedPlayer
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[QUOTE="Badosh"]

[QUOTE="charizard1605"] I honestly didn't think I could do it either. Like don't get me wrong, I write really fast, but I'm still low overall, because of how hard it is for me to keep my attention on the story or the book. This time though, I like neutered my computer by removing its internet, and went all in. I think it came out well, though I'm rewriting the last chapter right now to fix it.charizard1605

I totally know what you mean, I distracted far too often. How many words total is the novel?

Right now, I am at 48,901. The target is a 60,000-90,000 range. I'm thinking that I turn in a 60,000 word for class, and then go back, rework it, add another 20,000 words, and then start sending it out.

Good luck
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#178 freedomfreak
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[QUOTE="Badosh"][QUOTE="freedomfreak"]Sean just said the nicest thing to me. I might just start crying.

Start crying bro. My shoulder is here for you.

:cry: It.. was so..*sniff*.. sincere..
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#179 Badosh
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[QUOTE="freedomfreak"] :cry: It.. was so..*sniff*.. sincere..

He... meant every word... You're going to make me cry now :cry:
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Apparently it might snow on Sunday Night.

Please be true.I miss the snow :( (and all the sluge that is annoying as hell after the snow has melted :P)

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Ironic this lounge be called so when I got the worse case of the chills today when I woke up.
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Who wants to test a Skyrim mod for me?
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Who wants to test a Skyrim mod for me?Stevo_the_gamer
Is it just a house?
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[QUOTE="Stevo_the_gamer"]Who wants to test a Skyrim mod for me?siLVURcross
Is it just a house?

Yes and no. You have to go through a small nordic ruin to get some loot, defeat some draugrs, and then the final reward is a small house.
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I wonder what I should play after I beat Dead Island.

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#187 freedomfreak
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I wonder what I should play after I beat Dead Island.

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Can I choose?
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#188 Michael0134567
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[QUOTE="Michael0134567"]

I wonder what I should play after I beat Dead Island.

freedomfreak
Can I choose?

Yeah, there's many games I need to beat or finish.
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#189 freedomfreak
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[QUOTE="freedomfreak"][QUOTE="Michael0134567"]

I wonder what I should play after I beat Dead Island.

Michael0134567
Can I choose?

Yeah, there's many games I need to beat or finish.

Show me the ones you're interested in playing.
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#190 Michael0134567
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[QUOTE="freedomfreak"][QUOTE="Michael0134567"][QUOTE="freedomfreak"] Can I choose?

Yeah, there's many games I need to beat or finish.

Show me the ones you're interested in playing.

Grand Theft Auto IV, Final Fantasy XIII, Halo 3: ODST, Fable II, and Fable III are the first ones to come to mind. I've beaten Fable II and III, but I need to collect everything.
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#191 freedomfreak
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[QUOTE="Michael0134567"][QUOTE="freedomfreak"][QUOTE="Michael0134567"] Yeah, there's many games I need to beat or finish.

Show me the ones you're interested in playing.

Grand Theft Auto IV, Final Fantasy XIII, Halo 3: ODST, Fable II, and Fable III are the first ones to come to mind. I've beaten Fable II and III, but I need to collect everything.

GTAIV!!
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#192 Michael0134567
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[QUOTE="freedomfreak"][QUOTE="Michael0134567"][QUOTE="freedomfreak"] Show me the ones you're interested in playing.

Grand Theft Auto IV, Final Fantasy XIII, Halo 3: ODST, Fable II, and Fable III are the first ones to come to mind. I've beaten Fable II and III, but I need to collect everything.

GTAIV!!

Are you sure?
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#193 freedomfreak
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[QUOTE="Michael0134567"][QUOTE="freedomfreak"][QUOTE="Michael0134567"] Grand Theft Auto IV, Final Fantasy XIII, Halo 3: ODST, Fable II, and Fable III are the first ones to come to mind. I've beaten Fable II and III, but I need to collect everything.

GTAIV!!

Are you sure?

I love GTAIV. So, yes.
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#194 Michael0134567
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[QUOTE="freedomfreak"][QUOTE="Michael0134567"][QUOTE="freedomfreak"] GTAIV!!

Are you sure?

I love GTAIV. So, yes.

Lol alright. Thank you :P. Now I need to decide on a Wii game I should focus on.
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#195 freedomfreak
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[QUOTE="Michael0134567"][QUOTE="freedomfreak"][QUOTE="Michael0134567"] Are you sure?

I love GTAIV. So, yes.

Lol alright. Thank you :P. Now I need to decide on a Wii game I should focus on.

Care to list those you are interested in?
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No, play ODST first, damn it. It's short but oh so sweet.
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#197 Michael0134567
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[QUOTE="Blabadon"]No, play ODST first, damn it. It's short but oh so sweet.

I got like a couple levels left.
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#198 Michael0134567
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[QUOTE="freedomfreak"][QUOTE="Michael0134567"][QUOTE="freedomfreak"] I love GTAIV. So, yes.

Lol alright. Thank you :P. Now I need to decide on a Wii game I should focus on.

Care to list those you are interested in?

Too many games to finish :x :P.
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#200 freedomfreak
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[QUOTE="Michael0134567"][QUOTE="Blabadon"]No, play ODST first, damn it. It's short but oh so sweet.

I got like a couple levels left.

Finish ODST. Play GTAIV.