Like hip hop? Video of me rapping

Hey whats up, I just upped a video of me rapping on www.youtube.com/bornonallsevens, Check it out and comment good and bad ill accept w.e. My ****isnt like 50 cents or these other commercial type rappers. If you guys like i might upload more. Aiight holler back.Judonwanit

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lol.

What?Kikouken

Skills...Yes
Good lyrics....yes
really long 16 bars...yes

Cut your bars down a bit or else you'll be like tech 9 unless that's what you want.nirvana563

immortal technique is awesomewhodeysay85

he is teh pwnage

Hey whats up, I just upped a video of me rapping on youtube.com/bornonallsevens, Check it out and comment good and bad ill accept w.e. My Style isnt like 50 cents or these other commercial type rappers. If you guys like i might upload more. Aiight holler back.Judonwanit

FLow: it's alright but at some points it sounded like you were just talking and not rapping

Lyrics: it's good its a nice change of pace from the "superman dat ho" or "I get money"

Good for an amateur but I think you should speak louder or a lil slower cuz sometimes I can't understand you.

immortal technique is awesomewhodeysay85

i second this. i'm a metalhead, but IT is one of my favorite artists

anyway, that was pretty good. definitely a good start, and it seems like you have a talent for it.

You pretty much asked for this.

I thought this was going to be terrible, but instead I find that you have actual talent. Good job, nicely done. :)