Review Critiques

There must be some error in the database. I had posted this earlier, but recieved an error message when trying to refresh the page. I apologize if the same topic exists elsewhere as I looked for it, but could not find it.

The topic at hand here is that I'm looking for some critique on reviews I've posted here. I know one can simply just click on the agree or disagree button, but that does nothing in letting me know if I wrote my opinion well. Here a couple of reviews I have written. I appreciate all the help I can get. Thank you in advance and God bless you.

http://www.gamespot.com/ps3/action/infamous/player_review.html?id=770147

http://www.gamespot.com/snes/action/hoshinokirbysuperdeluxe/player_review.html?id=439279&tag=contributions%3Breview15

The previous topic has likely been deleted by a moderator, just like this one will. I guess creating threads to promote your reviews is a no-no. I think you can do that in your signature, though, hint hintBlack_Knight_00