• 18Oct 08

  sn fanfic in progress

  hey, guys, i'm been working on a fanfiction for this project i ahve to do, now i aint too confident about things i write and i hate to ahve ppl i know look at stuff i write, but if i dont get someones oppinion on it i aint ewver gona be able to hand it in for the project now it is jsut a work in progress at the moment, and what i ahve wirtten so far is pretty much jsut jotted down so i dont forget it, and it will get edited later to make more of a story, but yeah, oppinions please.

  Ok, heres what i have written so far, though i may warn i aint the best with grammar but i will have a friend look voer it before it gets submitted, and if i ahve mispelt anything or it seems like there is something missing blame word processor as i went threw the spell checker and jsut let it "correct everything" and id ont have time to check what it has messed with as i ahve to go bed in a minute but yeah everything will get fixed, so yeah here it is. or also the story itself is just gonna be so many words long as it is only for a short story thing, but if it is liked then i might adapt it into a full fanfiction for you guys. oh and i should mention it is themed on bonfire night, i had to choose a theme for it and seing as how november is coming up i choose bonfire night and sn.

  Bonfire Day Parade.

  Westminster

  Yorkshire

  5th of November 1605

  Late at night Guy Fawkes stood waiting for the rest of the men so they could carry the explosives into parliament

  403 years later

  5th of November 2008

  York Copmanthorpe Yorkshire

  "Aaron"

  "Aaron"

  Elwyn shouted, loud enough for Aaron to hear but quiet enough not to disturb his parents,

  Aaron her boyfriend was grounded, but they had made plans to hang out and she wasn't gonna let his parents get in the way of that.

  "Aaron" she shouted again, she was just about to throw another stone at the window when he appeared,

  "Hey, I'll be right there hold on," Aaron said.

  "Hurry up I'm cold,"

  Elwyn was 16, almost 17, Aaron was about to turn 18, and she loved him to death,

  They'd been going out for a year; they'd met on this very night at the bonfire night parade,

  Her little sister had died in the fire it was the saddest day of her life and he was there for her.

  "Aaron hurry up! Where gonna be late,"

  "I'm coming hold on"

  She heard him stage an argument with his parents,

  He slammed his bedroom door, then turned slipknots new album up really loud,

  "They should stay out for a couple of hours if not till morning"

  He started to climb down the guttering next to his window; he got half way then jumped down at her feet.

  "Hey baby"

  "Hey!"

  She pushed him up against the wall and kissed him.

  " Your such a bad boy Aaron James Thomson"

  Come on we better go before they hear us" Aaron said

  "Can they hear anything over your stereo?" Elwyn replied.

  "Probably not but just incase let's go"

  They ran down the driveway and around the corner to Elwyns

  Personalised red and black 64" Cadillac sedan Deville.

  It took 10 minutes to drive to the bonfire site; there they met up with

  Elwyns sisters Alex and Sarah and Aaron's brother Jordan she was about to give them a hug when they set off the

  First lot of fireworks,

  "Yay fireworks, they'll be setting the fire soon, come on guys" Elwyn said.

  She grabbed Aaron's hand and led them all to the big pile of wood; they found a dry spot of grass and sat down waiting for it to be

  lit.

  An hour later and the fire were just about burnt out and they were about to set off the last lot of fireworks.

  " Where gonna go on some rides, and mom and dad are here to pick up Alex,

  They want to know what you're doing?" Sarah asked.

  Elwyn yawned, Aaron told Sarah he'd take her home and then asked if he could drive the Cadillac back to his

  until morning.

  Sarah okied this and said goodnight to them both,

  November 1st

  Bobbies house

  Early hours of the morning

  "Dude what we doing here? It's what 5AM? Will bobby even be awake." dean said as he got out of the car.

  "Bobby said he has a case for us, and no he probably isn't awake," Sammy replied " and its 4 30 am"

  "Awe man, I should be in bed! Said dean " so what we gonna do? Sneak in and wait for him to wake up?"

  "Exactly"

  Sam tried the front door, when it didn't open he started picking the lock, it took all of 2 minutes to pick it, just as Sam was about to try the door again

  Bobby burst threw shotgun in hand.

  " Woah bobby it's us" dean said " don't shoot"

  "Dean? Bobby said "Sam? I thought you guys weren't meant to be here till tomorrow?"

  "I know but we finished a case sooner then we thought" replied Sam.

  "Oh" said bobby " well come in, come in"

  "So, bobby, what's this case you have for us?"

  Has either of you ever heard of Guy Fawkes night or bonfire night?

  "No" said dean.

  "Yeah" replied Sam, " its a British tradition to celebrate Guy Fawkes."

  "Why?" said dean well munching on an apple pie" What did he do? Blow somebody up?"

  Actually almost, he was apart of the gunpowder plot to blow up the house of parliament and kill king James 1st and VI and anyone else in the building at the time"

  "Why?"

  "cos they he didn't agree with them, Guy Fawkes was catholic, parliament didn't like Catholics, the plan was to kill King James and have his daughter

  Become queen, as a catholic.

  " Ok but what has that got to do with the case?"

  " A friend of mine had a brother that was a hunter, he was on a case around this time last year, people had been dying in bonfires,

  And there was a supernatural reason behind them, he died in house fire, " replied bobby.

  "And this thing is still loose and your friend wants us to finish where his brother left off?" said dean.

  "Exactly"

  We'll get on it tomorrow right now I'm going bed" said dean.

  Whets for breakfast?"

  "Dean, its dinnertime" replied Sammy.

  "Ok, whets for dinner then? Is there pie?

  " You have a plane to catch in 2 hours, at 8pm, for England, York, you should be there for around 3am, though it will be 7pm there,

  "Awe man planes"

  "Get on the plane dean" said sam 2 hours later, " where late as it is thanks to you and your urge for burgers"

  " I don't want to, and hey they were some good burgers" replied dean.

  "I'll push you."

  "Come on sam, you know I don't like flying."

  "I'm sorry sir but where leaving in 10 minutes, please get on the plane or leave" said the female flight attendant.

  " Are you gonna be on the plane?" replied dean.

  "Yes sir"

  "Then I'll get on the plane"

  "Finally, thank you." said sam.

  "Your welcome, sir. " said the flight attendant.

  "Oh boy" said dean half an hour later. Why did I get on the plane?"

  "Just listen to Metallica until we get off." replied sam.

  "Good idea, " said Dean as he sticks in the earphones and turns the player up high.

  "Dean can you hear me?"

  "Hush little baby..."

  7 hours later

  York, Yorkshire.

  England.

  7am,

  thats all i ahve so far, please dont be too harse, and remember this is jsut jotted down stuff i ahd in ym head for the story, ti will be editted

  • Posted Oct 18, 2008 3:49 pm PT
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• 16Sep 08

  nickelback

  i went to see nickelback last night at the MEN Arena, it was awesome, i got beer threw at me by ryan peake(guiterist) went shopping in manchester beforehand, i have never brought so many clothes, i spent over 80 quid, and i onyl went with 55, so now me and my mom are confused about who owes who what, cos she payed for most of the stuff on her credit card so i didnt have to spend my money, so we cant figure out how i have no money left. its rather confusing really, i'm knackered though, didnt get home till 12am didnt go bed till 1 cos i wanted to try on all ym new clothes lol,. lol, i got a new corset, which i am gonn wear to a party i am throwing on the 27th, my mom is in leeds for ther night and i have the house to myself, so ofcourse i am using my natural teen habit of throwing a party when my parents are out fo town, so yeah, , nickelback was awesome, they didnt play my favourite song but they played spome good ones, it was lots of fun, we were right up to the stage too, we were seated, so nto as close as i wanted but still pretty close, it was side view which i though was a bit bad but we had the big massive screen right next of us.

  anyways gotta go..ttyl

  • Posted Sep 16, 2008 2:09 am PT
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• 12Sep 08

  my aunts new website...and my summer

  ok, so my aunt, who i have started calling ym mom again so if i say mom i mean my aunt, just to confuse ya, but yeah my aunt has started a website and she has been buggin em to help her advertise it on things so i have gone threw my myspace and anything else i have an account on so i thought i'd try here, so anyways yeah heres the URL so go check it out so my mom will pay me for helping....

  www.ravens-isle.com

  ok so beside from that seeing as how i havent been on all summer i figure i'd update y'all on what i have been upto.

  ok so, where to start? ok so at the start of the year my little sister, well my aunts duaghter but she grew up as my sister so, yeah she died on the 11th of january a month after her 5th birthday, whihc was pretty sad, she had a brain hemmorage(i know its splet wrong but tis a big word,lol) so yeah after that my aunt and her husband split up cos he wanted a baby rigth after she died and my aunt didnt and he jsut kept buggin her and ignoring her when she said she didnt want another baby, so eventualy she kicked him out, so yeah, following ym sisters death i had to see if i had what she had, whihc thank fully i dont, i have a perfectly well working brain apperently, yay.lol

  so yeah a few months after her death nothing really happened, i jsut sat in my room and sulked for a few months without coming out so not really much to say there, but the 6 week school break was fun, i made some new friends broke up with ym violent bf and got with a guy that i had liked for awhile, we broke up after a week opf dating cos we barely saw each other but he was living at his dads for the week so we could barely see each other, we still have little make out sessions every so often but i think for now its best being friends cos he is one of my bestest friends and has always been and if we dated and ened up breaking up i dont think we could be friends again and i dont want to risk that cos is friends are my friends and it would just be awkward, so that was the first week ok break, so yeah i had and went to some parties, though may i say the only good ones were the ones i hosted, lol, so yeay made new friends broke up with violent bf, yeah o yeah and i go banned from the street i live on, becos of the guy i was dating, the violent one, his name was jordan so anyways yeah i broke up wit him cos he hit me, and then one night his mother sarted a figth with me, loud mouth **** she woke up the street, now may i say i told her to stop shouting at me like an immature spoilt brat and just tlk to me cos there was ppl complaining but she wouldnt so the next day the woman who lives across the road form her, sam got her daughter to beat me up and decided i wasnt aloud on the street again, now i'll stay away from her house but i aint being banned from the street she doesnt own it so she can go get f*cked, but yeah she got her daugther to beat me up twice, so yeah, there is one good thing to come out of it though, i found out who my real friends were, so yeah thats pretty much ym entire summer, everyones gone bak to school now and obviously i am home tought so i havent so, right now i am jsut helping ym mom with ehr website and..oh i ahve been decorating ym bedroom, i have 2 bedrooms now, my little sisters bedroom whihc i ahve painted is my bedroom and my old bedroom is gonna be nmy little entertainment room, with a big tv game consules computer and just a full entertainment system, its gonna be awesome..lol.....

  so how was your summer?

  ttyl-ellie

  • Posted Sep 12, 2008 3:12 am PT
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