So it has come to my attention that after bringing my story from Word to here that the quotation marks for dialogue are no longer there. But to follow all you need to know is that dialogue is the parts that are not indented.
Sorry for this error, I was having a bunch of issues getting it to post due to exceeding the amount of characters per post that I didn't notice the lack of quotations.
As always, best of luck to all who entered, it's nice to see that writing is still in fashion.
**And upon further inspection it seems all apostrophes have also disappeared. I tell you, there must be an unwritten law of all computer programs that formatting must never go smoothly.