Hey all Dan here, How about we take a break from soccer huh?.I wanted to show you guys some freewriting. freewriting is when you don't think about spelling mistakes or grammer all you do is write for 5 or ten minutes non stop. I heared that this is what make elemetry School kids do. LOL I'm pretty childish so no wonder I liked it so much. I posted this on the Writers Union board it's a pretty cool union. I like free writing it cause it gives me story ideas and it's intersting to see how my twisted mind works! lol and I always feel relaxed after I do it. So yeah these are the Free writing rules:
Give yourself a time limit. Write for one or ten or twenty minutes, and then stop.
Keep your hand moving until the time is up. Do not pause to stare into space or to read what you've written. Write quickly but not in a hurry.
Pay no attention to grammar, spelling, punctuation, neatness, or **** Nobody else needs to read what you produce here. The correctness and quality of what you write do not matter; the act of writing does.
If you get off the topic or run out of ideas, keep writing anyway. If necessary, write nonsense or whatever comes into your head, or simply scribble: anything to keep the hand moving.
If you feel bored or uncomfortable as you're writing, ask yourself what's bothering you and write about that.
When the time is up, look over what you've written, and mark passages that contain ideas or phrases that might be worth keeping or elaborating on in a subsequent free-writing session.
Sounds weird right but don't worry you get used to it after a while and becomes a lot of fun. K those are the rules and heres what I came up with:
Hear My Cry
Everything happens for a reason and there is a reason for everything. In this life we always assume things about others with out really knowing them this is mankind's biggest flaw. This is why men ruin corrupt and destroy. People fear what they don't understand. Because f the ignorance of other this twisted society will fall. And what we consider normal will no longer be normal. What is normal anyway? Is being normal doing what everyone else does and following the pack. The society that we live in limits originality. It limits freedom. Everything is predetermined. There no way for you stand up for what you belive in because in this society you will always be judged. Those who you claim to love will judge you question you exile you for doing what you belive is right, If you have every felt like a exile like an outcast like you don't belong any where please hear my cry.
Wow. I didn't want to sound like a bitter old man. lol . Please feel free to commet on my work or post your own free writing. So that's what I came up with what do you think?