Wow, not sure which is more annoying your 'rap' or the people who actually thought it was good, or most likely the ones who came back with their own... not sure what to call them. Uh yeah... I'm pretty sure you only ever rhymed the same words... something decent would be like this:
You don't even got a rhyme scheme kid, your lacking plot
How you gonna try to rap when you can barely hold a thought
And that would just be a quick line to you about your 'rap'. I know you are only joking but garbage is garbage...
If you can't ryhme good then use metaphors and similes, pop culture stuff is good like:
Then Bill Gates yelled 'damn you all' like Stewie Griffin
or also allude to something that people may remember sometimes obscurity is good (non related but I've used this before in a joke freestyle)
and I can book it, cause I'm all about them personal pan pizzas but
I don't gotta wait around in line, cause they know me at the hut
(not sure if your familiar with the program you read books and after so many you could get a personal pan pizza)
So there you go not gonna **** you out for this just to help you improve.
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