My response to the recent violence in Pakistan caused by a movie

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#1 randex
Member since 2004 • 3331 Posts

I've lived in Canada most of my life and 2 years ago I moved to Pakistan to maybe try and do some good with my law degree. This is my response to the recent turmoil that has been caused in Pakistan all because of a movie.

alihamza.posterous.com/head-thump
please to go this URL because for some damn reason I can't copy and paste the text onto here using Firefox.

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#2 waZelda
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I don't really know the backstory here. While I understand the text, I think it would have a bit more meaning if I knew more about the incidence.
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#3 sandyqbg
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Firstly, a littlemore context would have helped. Secondly, there seem a problem with the way you've strung different points together. They just don't seem to come together - an example would be how you brought together superfluous and inevitable. I mean I get the drift, but is there something significant that I should infer from the connection?