Much appreciated! Glad you're enjoying it.
What job requires several-week training though?
iloveflash
It's only on-call (postal plant downtown), but man, the kind of bullshit and hoops I had to jump through just to apply/get an interview... >_> Shoulda clarified, that took since the end of April, then actual training for a week. It's no fun waking up at 5am to catch the train. Needless to say, the only thing I wanted to do each day was draw before I had to hit bed at 10pm. But I'm back to my old crappy sleep schedule, where peak writing hours is at 4am!
Anyway that's off topic. So I remember reading a few weeks back where Elf got cleaved in the gut, and I was like hooly shet. I think that's about the first time a character got seriously wounded and not just knocked out (I originally thought Noa killed the agents when she escaped by ripping their jewels out... what a twist that would be, eh?). So I'm not sure if I like how seemingly fast Elf has bounced back in this last chapter. The last time we were with Delta, he was bumming everyone out, but I liked that tense feeling of danger, and the disarray that goes on after number one goes down. Not that Elf needs to die and everyone spends a few chapters crying about it... obviously it's early and there's still a lot of time, but I see dramatic potential from that little incident. If it's Ziare's fault, it needs to come back to Elf in some way. Or if Elf thinks it's her own fault, I definitely want to see some follow up to see how it's affected her mentally (what this means in the future regarding her attitude, disposition towards her team members, etc). Close call like that, can't be brushing it off too easy!
Love the setup between Ghost/Van/the less enthused members. It'll be fun to read what goes down between all of them. Van needs to hurry up and get off his ass and into the fray (figuratively speaking, because I'll say again the parts I like the most are the lulls between battles.) This might be a personal preference of mine, but the parts I really like are the glimpses of history that's established between many of the players, and how that makes them act. I'm probably just a sucker for stirring up a dramatic brouhaha, but I really want to see what might make Elf squad fall apart. And I say this because all of the agents have strong personalities, the tension should be even greater, pulling the group in different directions. The setup's already there. Can you give any hints as to if you might be going in this direction, or are you thinking that's a flat out no?Â
Anyway, good stuff. Really exciting that so much content's been posted, and so much has already happened, and just keeps ramping up. Keep up the pace.
Also, Ziare should be fired for his incompetence. That is all.
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