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#1 HybridKing
Member since 2012 • 8322 Posts

V1-

V2- -Touched up the gunshot the best I could and blended in some of the other effects.

Think I'm in a funk, but whatever, maybe just a result of trying several new styles at once.

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#2 BrunoBRS
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usually when you plagiarize someone, you don't make it worse :P

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#3 HybridKing
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usually when you plagiarize someone, you don't make it worse :P

BrunoBRS

Whoa, didn't mean to do that :?

EDIT-And uh...what'd you mean by..."Don't make it worse"? Hmmmm? :P

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#4 Shadowchronicle
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I thought it was familiar now I remember why I was looking at that image and was like: that seems familiar. :lol:
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#5 BrunoBRS
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that gunshot is atrocious. i recommend manually fixing it, if you think you're up to the task. not particularly fond of the C4D on the bottom right either.

 

but overall, it's more a case of jason doing a far better job than you making it bad :P

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#6 HybridKing
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The gunshot was part of the stock, I didn't do a thing with it beyond render it.

Well excuse me for not being as good as Jason >.> :P 

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#7 BrunoBRS
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"it's part of the stock" is not an excuse. it looks bad when rendered, so you'd have to redo it (like jason did *cough*) to make it look good.
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#8 HybridKing
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Well aren't you subtle.

Wasn't using it as an excuse,  was saying I didn't create it. So would using a brush be the way to create it?

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#9 Dgalmun
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Hey, you don't have to be a dick to everybody, Bruno.

Simply give constructive criticism or shut up instead of being a douchebag.

 

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#10 the-silent-hero
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LOL I was waiting for someone to say it
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#11 anihimz
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Immediately when looking at it I was reminded of Jason's LP lol. But anyways... I agree with Bruno about the gunshot. To be honest, I think you should get rid of the gunshot completely and try to create your own with c4ds/fractals, or render out a separate gunshot and replace it, idk. Don't like the big soft brushing either. Atmosphere/placement of effects + logo is good tho. For the c4ds on the right I don't like how it's purple, and the rest of the atmosphere is yellow. Kinda throws you off a bit. But I do like it.
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#12 HybridKing
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LOL I was waiting for someone to say itthe-silent-hero
Were you planning to say it instead? :Pjk

@Ani-Yeah, I noticed the c4d kinda clashed but I didn't really mind it so I left it lol

As for the gunshot though, I don't think I'm gonna do anything with it, its not bothering me sooo...yeah.

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#13 the-silent-hero
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Hey, you don't have to be a dick to everybody, Bruno.

Simply give constructive criticism or shut up instead of being a douchebag.

 

Dgalmun

I was talking about this. :P

 

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#14 HybridKing
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[QUOTE="Dgalmun"]

Hey, you don't have to be a dick to everybody, Bruno.

Simply give constructive criticism or shut up instead of being a douchebag.

 

the-silent-hero

I was talking about this. :P

 

So was I :P
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#15 BrunoBRS
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Well aren't you subtle.

Wasn't using it as an excuse,  was saying I didn't create it. So would using a brush be the way to create it?

HybridKing
erasing most of it and leaving a general shape and then using smudging for the rest might be the simplest way.
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#16 Dudersaper
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I don't think it's miles worse than Jason's as you make it seem, Bruno. With a little bit of work his piece can become better than Jay's (no offense to Jay's work, I love it).

 

Just fix that blast, add some FG FX and give a few touches to blend everything together and it'll be dope.

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#17 BrunoBRS
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where did i say miles worse? why am i suddenly the villain here? :|
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#18 HybridKing
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where did i say miles worse? why am i suddenly the villain here? :|BrunoBRS
Not those exact words per se but that must have been the impression you were giving off :P

Anyway, edit is up.

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#19 BrunoBRS
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omg he has the mega buster! he can fire lemons! :P

not sure i see any changes other than being slightly darker and the lemon gunshot.

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#20 anihimz
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In V2 his hand (holding the gun) looks really awkward compared to the rest of the render
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#21 HybridKing
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omg he has the mega buster! he can fire lemons! :P

not sure i see any changes other than being slightly darker and the lemon gunshot.

BrunoBRS

*Ignores Megaman reference*

The effects you didn't like? Take a good look at them

@Ani-Which is odd considering I didn't do a thing with it lol

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#22 BrunoBRS
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i... am? only things that bothered me were the gunshot (which unfortunately i must say aren't any better, try to make it much smaller, doesn't hurt to use jason's version as reference since the two look so similar anyway :P) and the C4D on the bottom right, which is still there (though it's not as much "don't like it" as it is "could've chosen something better")
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#23 HybridKing
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i... am? only things that bothered me were the gunshot (which unfortunately i must say aren't any better, try to make it much smaller, doesn't hurt to use jason's version as reference since the two look so similar anyway :P) and the C4D on the bottom right, which is still there (though it's not as much "don't like it" as it is "could've chosen something better")BrunoBRS
Those same effects were the ones I was talking about, problem is I forgot to add "on the right" lol
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#24 BrunoBRS
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umm... look again. they're still there.
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#25 HybridKing
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...I know. I tweaked the colors of them...