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#1 EE2lemmonhead
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http://www.garageband.com/mp3player?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSgYlO3ams
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#2 Xeros606
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fail.
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#3 EE2lemmonhead
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I fail.Xeros606

 

We know you do

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#4 Yongying
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The trumpet (?) sound is kinda out of sync/doesn't sound too good, the voice is terrible, can't understand a thing, then all of a sudden....indian music! wtf :P
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#5 jmg128thinfrgt
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how long have you been making music? You only use Garage band?
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#6 alphamale1989
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Thats really not my style.

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#7 EE2lemmonhead
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umm the trumpet? indian music? are you on the same mp3? holy crap. garage band no, i use hardware synths and FL studio and there is a sample from earth wind and fire - september
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#8 jmg128thinfrgt
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Ive done some stuff on FL too

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#9 Samwel_X
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It isn't great...

It sounds like a cheap wedding band doing Daft Punk.

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#10 Gh0st_Of_0nyx
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That sounds horrible.
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#11 spark5050
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I don't think it sounds that bad, kinda sounds like a bad version of daft punk.
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#12 Yongying
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umm the trumpet? indian music? are you on the same mp3? holy crap. garage band no, i use hardware synths and FL studio and there is a sample from earth wind and fire - septemberEE2lemmonhead
i tried to describe it best i could.

You could make the trumpet sound a bit more smooth.

Like letting the sound fade out till it reaches the next sound.

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#13 KiddSushi
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Needs a lot of work, but it has potential. The sounds don't seem to be the same volume, so things sound out of place. Like they're not part of the same song...

I also just noticed that in the beginning, your sample doesn't transition smoothly.