Aspiring Video Game Musician

Hey guys,

I'll keep it short. My dream is to make music for video games. Due to school, I don't have much of a budget to create stuff with, so I'm using my sister's IPad and a cheap acoustic guitar to compose some stuff.

Here are the two covers I'm most proud of.

Super Mario 3D World - Main Theme:

Donkey Kong Country 2 - Stickerbrush Symphony:

More than anything, I'm really looking for feedback on this covers. I really want to improve.

If you can tell me what you enjoyed, and where you think there could be some improvement, that would mean a lot. By all means, you can tell me to go screw myself, but I sincerely hope you'll leave some constructive criticism for me to work on!

Thanks a lot guys!

@Iszdope: Should I post this in gaming? I was originally going to, but I figured off-topic might work since this is a bit more 'general'.

Is there any way to delete this thread?