Just realized they added a 5 minute edit timer here... not sure I like that, but anyways, I'll just play the rest of your levels before posting.
Piranha Plant Panic!: Defeated (8.55%)
Cheep- Cannon Cavern= I really liked this level. Giving it a star. The Bullet Bills are a great touch underwater. The last part of the level was really nicely done. If I had any advice however, I would say that perhaps 3 hits (from the fire flower) is overkill, because someone could essentially get hit twice and fall to the bottom under a cloak of invincibility. I didn't take a hit going down, but I imagine a lot will. Defeated (11.11%)
King Boo's Fire House= Everything about this level was fine except one thing, and that isn't necessarily your fault. I wish the screen would scroll up faster when you go off screen. That was alleviated when I found the catch though. I wont give away any spoilers though :) Defeated (3.48%)
Red Koopa's Leap of Faith= This level suffers a but from the highest peak of the first large mountain being just a tile or two too high. I defeated it, but with the koopa flying off the map, it adds an element of luck since you can neither see it or yourself. On that note however, that is a minor gripe, and I can't complain about the "leap of faith" because that is what the level is all about.. lol. Overall, the bouncing mechanics are good, and the fact that the Koopa's aren't lined up perfectly makes for a bit of chaos. Would play again. So far this is my second favorite level you have made a little behind Cheep- Cannon Cavern. I'm going to go ahead and star it, because being nitpicky over one little thing is harsh. Defeated (9.9%)
Syrup Castle 1= Definitely your easiest level so far. However, I did enjoy the P-Switch mechanic. At first I was wondering what the point was as I easily traversed the coin pits, but then saw the catch near the end. Defeated (33.33%)
Syrup Castle 2= Wow, nicely done :) EASILY my favorite so far. Nice length, and a steady supply of power ups at clutch moments. The fact that instant death is ALSO present a lot of the time negates the feeling of being overpowered. Nice work on the vines with the alternating jet fire. This one easily gets a star, and I find myself with very little criticism. Great work! Defeated (I was the first to defeat this level).
Syrup Castle 3= Again I was the first to clear this level (1/9). I didn't like this one quite as much as SC2, and the reason is simply because of the flying spiky's that shoot said spikes. They clip through any object and in tight places they could become a problem, although I didn't have any. However, it did slow me down and force me to traverse the level at a much slower rate. I'm still giving it a star however, because as far as level design it is spot on. Defeated (1/24 as of writing this meaning 14 others have failed since I started playing and writing about this level.. lol. I'm still the only one to beat it.
Syrup Castle 4= I liked everything about this level until the end, and the cramped close quarters fight with Bowser. I still made it work, but since he jumps at random, I did take a death by not being able to hit him with enough fireballs, and he refused to jump... lol. Again as with 2 and 3, great level design and another star from me. I was also the first to beat this level as well. As of writing this (1/20 completion rate) Defeated.
Well, that's all your levels. My favorite remains Syrup Castle 2 followed by Cheep- Canon Cavern. Great work, and keep them coming. I will add you as a favorite so I can keep tabs on further developments. :)
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