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Hey man, I'am going to go with face-palm, to me it just looked like a pile of video game vomit all mushed together without any rhyme or reason. Plus I never really found any of it that funny, essentially due to the fact that I never really knew what exactly was going on. In saying all of this, its definitely a start of a good concept, you may choose to keep this series running, but you may also want to look into what you could due to make it funnier without having to rely on sketchy jump-cuts and bland sexual/toilet humour ( not that you shouldn't use either, but try to be more inventing )
Again, you have a good concept in your hand and aslong as you strive to improve on it, it really could be something entertaining.
ps: I used to actually direct/film proper machinima ;)